Suffering
Writer follows all the rules11 total reviews
Comment from beizanten
Great, the story is interesting from start to finish. The characters is believable. I love that the waitress told of the writer, sorry but he is pretty arrogant but I guess the girl did kind of insult him by calling him a wannabe writer even if his story seem boring.
My favorite line "A writer doesn't look at it like it's a job. Writing is a passion. Words become your lover. You try to seduce them into sentences that will draw your reader in and hypnotize them. Each page should lure them deeper into the world of your making. You want them to weep with sadness as they realize they are reading the last page." She looks at me with a hint of pity in her eyes. "That is a writer."
That is so very true and beautiful and deep! Thank you for the insight!!
Love the ending!~ Look like she should be an editor instead of a waitress or a writer herself
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Great, the story is interesting from start to finish. The characters is believable. I love that the waitress told of the writer, sorry but he is pretty arrogant but I guess the girl did kind of insult him by calling him a wannabe writer even if his story seem boring.
My favorite line "A writer doesn't look at it like it's a job. Writing is a passion. Words become your lover. You try to seduce them into sentences that will draw your reader in and hypnotize them. Each page should lure them deeper into the world of your making. You want them to weep with sadness as they realize they are reading the last page." She looks at me with a hint of pity in her eyes. "That is a writer."
That is so very true and beautiful and deep! Thank you for the insight!!
Love the ending!~ Look like she should be an editor instead of a waitress or a writer herself
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Thank you. :)
