Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

I love Angelheart's artwork. She is very talented and has such a great variety of pictures. It compliments your entry into the "Write a Haiku" contest very nicely...according to the requirements set above, you have met them with this very well-penned Haiku. Great satori. Good luck in the contest with this submission. I thoroughly enjoyed this work. Very good job and should fare well in the contest. Good luck. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2016

Thanks for the encouraging review, Yes, Angelheart is my favorite. Cheers, j

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A wonderful haiku with great concrete imagery, two interconnected lines and a great satori. Nice image to accentuate your words.

I have two questions: what is "mandala" and what is "namaste".

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016

Thanks for the review. Mandalas are these beautiful geometric circles that buddests use to meditate on, different ones for different meditations and namaste is the greeting with palms together that means, I bow to you. Before and after yoga classes the teacher will say namaste to the students. Google mandala and you will see some beautiful designs. Cheers, j

Comment from djeckert

Excellent

cool, you are making me look up some words. I always like to learn new ones. Im thinking namaste somehow describes the area of the sunrise??. God surely blesses

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thanks for the review Namaste (na mast ay) means I bow to you. At the beginning and end of a yoga class, the teacher will say this, with palms together, like thank you. Cheers, j

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Yes bow to the sun peeking through the clouds good entry on the prompt good thought on this good luck on it and have a great day

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016

Thanks for the review William, cheers, j