haiku (salty waves)
haiku contest16 total reviews
Comment from jusylee72
Wow, I something about Haiku today. I didn't realize it is suppose to be about a true event. That is so interesting.
Your poem does an excellent job of ceasing the moment . I truly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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Wow, I something about Haiku today. I didn't realize it is suppose to be about a true event. That is so interesting.
Your poem does an excellent job of ceasing the moment . I truly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the very thoughtful review
Comment from ElegantButler
A fun little haiku. It is very well written and it made me smile. I really love haiku's. I find them not necessarily better than long-form poetry, but certainly easier to remember.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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A fun little haiku. It is very well written and it made me smile. I really love haiku's. I find them not necessarily better than long-form poetry, but certainly easier to remember.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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Thank you.
Comment from William Ross
A good haiku on the salty waves of the ocean pounding the shore while he steps in, good write and thought good luck and have a great day
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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A good haiku on the salty waves of the ocean pounding the shore while he steps in, good write and thought good luck and have a great day
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the review
Comment from joannakruk
Ooooo I like this one. I take there is a double meaning for the salty waves - tears? Has the lover been the catalyst for their appearance? The descriptions of Tumultuous waves in the second line would suggest that they arose from unpleasant circumstances, a fight, breakup? Very clever.
Jo :-)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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Ooooo I like this one. I take there is a double meaning for the salty waves - tears? Has the lover been the catalyst for their appearance? The descriptions of Tumultuous waves in the second line would suggest that they arose from unpleasant circumstances, a fight, breakup? Very clever.
Jo :-)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2016
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I enjoy when authors read their own thoughts into a haiku or prose. My vision is different (think sex), but I found yours thought provoking. Thank you for the wonderful review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. I appreciate the instructions on how to write one. Great job. Teri
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016
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This is a very good haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. I appreciate the instructions on how to write one. Great job. Teri
Comment Written 08-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016
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Thank you for the review
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you are welcome. Teri
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you are welcome. Teri
Comment from Selina Stambi
I had to re-read this piece to absorb the import of the words.
Really well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016
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I had to re-read this piece to absorb the import of the words.
Really well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
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Comment Written 08-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2016
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Thank you, I was hoping at least one "Fanstorian" could get the subtle comment.
