Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Gitana. This is a lovely haiku. I love it. You have given me so much inspiration writing them, but also helped me a lot. Muchas gracias. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2016

Thank you, Ulla, you are so sweet! I appreciate your review. Muchas gracias guapa, de tu amiga la gitana.... besitos mua mua

Comment from Unspoken94

Excellent

Nice development of sound, sight and poetry. Just like you.
Another Haiku in the style of Marival. Perhaps it is so good
because of the gift it was given to. -Bill

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2016

Thank you, Bill :) gypsy hugs

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, what a wonderful poem to the one you love...you are both very lucky to have each other...I would love to be in that house with all the beautiful trees...love your poem sweet girl...and a stunning picture...great sounds effects...love ya you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you very much, Linda, for the kind and excellent review. *gypsy hugs and luvs*

reply by l.raven on 14-Jun-2016

you are so welcome you...anytime...love ya ,,,Linda xxoo

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

Very nice! I love the audio, that is one of my favorite sounds :)
I can see that lake, and smell the chestnuts roasting...a peaceful evening and one mate calls out for the other...all species participate :)

hugs,
Carol

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you very much, Carol, for the kind and excellent review. *gypsy hugs*

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

This is absolutely stunning in presentation! The colors are stunning. You exposed a lovely thought in a combination of total 17 syllables.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you very much for the kind and excellent review. *gypsy hugs*

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Beautiful artwork, and it shows the beauty of autumn. Great insight in showing the bird looking after its mate, calling that dinner is ready. The smell of the chestnuts roasting must carry. Sound is important to these hawks, as they can really communicate that way. You have great insights into these displays in nature. judi

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you very much, Judi, for the kind and excellent review. *gypsy hugs*

reply by judiverse on 14-Jun-2016

You're very welcome. Write on! judi

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, *Gypsy*

= Beautiful artwork!
= Perfect for your haiku
= The sound affects add a special touch.
= Great job with this one.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you very much for the kind and excellent review. *gypsy hugs*

Comment from sage17611

Excellent

Well done Gypsy, I really like the theme of your Haiku poem which is very visual and relaxing. The picture is absolutely beautiful with all of the rich colors, very nice choice. The poem is well written and flows nice, good job.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you, Sage, you are very kind. I always appreciate excellent reviewers like you, Sage.
*gypsy hugs*

Thank you, , you are very kind. I always appreciate excellent reviewers like you, .
*gypsy hugs*

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Hi Gypsy;
-I like you incorporating the sounds of the crows and the picture all is very appropriate, relative and supported to the conceptual theme of your writing.
-I also enjoyed the humor from the crows viewpoint of this writing and your first two lines are grammatically interconnected with an imagery that is very distinctly fair and definitively expressive and demand demonstratively descriptive.
-Your third line I believe in your satori gives your haiku that aha moment and the excitement of spontaneity and summarizes the relativity of the conceptual theme.
-Thank you for sharing a posting and may the good Lord be with you always Gypsy.
Alex

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you, Alex, you are very kind. I always appreciate excellent reviewers like you, Alex .
*gypsy hugs*

reply by krys123 on 14-Jun-2016

You are very welcome Gypsy.
Alex

Comment from danpald

Excellent

Lovely picture does invite
To the feast of hawks delight
Feasting on the remains
Found for lovers in autumn display

The sweet poem fills the day with charm
Flowing with the mating call
How lovely the scene in the woods
Filled with color to calm the soul

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2016

Thank you, Dan, you are very kind. I always appreciate excellent reviewers like you, Dan .
*gypsy hugs*