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Comment from BlueTiger
Fantastic job on this poem!
As a California native I'm partial to the first section of this poem, and your description of the Santa Ana's - your writing really captures that terrible power of the wind and wildfires.
This is a long piece, but your layout really helps break it down and make it easy to read.
I also appreciated the research that you did, and how you incorporated the Anemoi into the work.
Great job, I really enjoyed reading this!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2016
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Fantastic job on this poem!
As a California native I'm partial to the first section of this poem, and your description of the Santa Ana's - your writing really captures that terrible power of the wind and wildfires.
This is a long piece, but your layout really helps break it down and make it easy to read.
I also appreciated the research that you did, and how you incorporated the Anemoi into the work.
Great job, I really enjoyed reading this!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2016
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Those Santa Anas are really something, aren't they? The fires so far this year have been really scary. I'm glad the layout helped as the poem is indeed VERY long. I almost posted it in four pieces but hated to break it up. Thanks for such a fine review :)) Carol
