Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Gypsy, very clever and very well thought of...nothing taste better than strawberry jam on toast...and lots of it...very nicely written sweet lady...love your poem...picture perfect...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2016

Luv ya too, Linda :) Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.

reply by l.raven on 24-Jun-2016

alwayssssssss so very welcome...love to ya...smiling back at ya...xxoo Linda

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

It is time for strawberries! Someone brought me some fresh strawberries that were really delicious, and the supermarket has been having good strawberries, not the sour, hard ones that they sometimes have. That is certainly an appealing picture. Abundantly and April--nice sound. I prefer preserves to jam, but either way, it's good. This one really has sensory appeal. judi

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016

Thank you very much for the review and your kind words.

reply by judiverse on 18-Jun-2016

You're welcome. There's an orchard close to us. I just may have to go and buy some fresh strawberries. judi

reply by Anonymous Member on 20-Jun-2016

You're welcome. There's an orchard close to us. I just may have to go and buy some fresh strawberries. judi

Comment from Lisa Deverick

Exceptional

This is a perfect haiku - there is nothing more you could do to make it better! So simple it speaks clearly yet hints at homemade jam to come..

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016

Thank you very much for the review and your kind words.

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi GBR,
what a contrast from scary spiders. I like this one and the last line is so scrummy.
I am now off to make a jam butty.
Great poem.
Brenda:))x

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016

Thank you very much for the review and your kind words.

Comment from Marykelly

Excellent

The reference to strawberry jam is very clever and makes me want some strawberry jam and toast. The imagery of strawberries is vivid and the harvesting of the fruit is comforting in its annual routine.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016

Thank you very much for the review and your kind words.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

Oh yum, a haiku good enough to eat, nicely worded and your usual wonderful presentation. My grandma used to make jam from her strawberries and it was delicious. Thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016

Thank you very much, John. You are very kind and I enjoy your reviews, it's always good to see you. I hope you are all having good weather in England. California was sunny but not too hot today. :)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Gypsy

= Used to raise/sell strawberries. YUM!
= I've never met a strawberry I didn't like.
= Fun haiku.

(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-Down (*>*)
Cheers & Blessings ... Jacqueline ~ Jackie ~ Jax

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016

Thank you, Jax :)

Comment from danpald

Excellent

Much more to the treat
Tasty food is always sweet
So much liked with whip cream
Or dipped in chocolate is a dream

Have a great day my friend

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2016

Thank you, Dan