Comment from GoodHearted Woman

Excellent

jbird--always nice to hear from you. Some interesting questions you pose in your poem, your dream poem. Bible does say we are to work out our Salvation with fear and trembling, so I think you're on the right path there. (Doesn't help, I know). I think your own faith is strong, so maybe this will plant a seed in someone else's heart, or stir them to think into the deeper things of life. We just never know who we touch. But I'm sure you have touched many in your lifetime. Good post. Thanks.
GoodHearted Woman

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

It is always nice hearing from you. You sort of give me a lift-thank you

reply by GoodHearted Woman on 22-Jun-2016

I always look forward to hearing from you too! Marcia

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hi my goodness what an awesomw lyrical poem, i really wished i had a 6, this is so deserving of it, i really enjoyed reading this poem, you can preach to me about God nytime :)

great job and good luck in the contest

LOVED IT

Regards
Tia

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2016

Thank you friend, you have really inspired me