Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "A Scarred Heart"My book of poems and stories
11 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. Lifelong friends never reveal their true feelings for each other. The one find another to replace the other just have the memories.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. Lifelong friends never reveal their true feelings for each other. The one find another to replace the other just have the memories.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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How wise a statement. It is sad but then sometimes when true feelings are shared it ruins a good friendship. Thank you for your review.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very good poem totally fits the prompt. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Excellent choice of artwork. Thank you for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Very good poem totally fits the prompt. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Excellent choice of artwork. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for your kind review. It was interesting writing from the other gender. That was a first and I was afraid that it would read too feminine. Have a great day.
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You're welcome. I thought it was sensitive, but I had no idea it was written by a woman!
Comment from Bobbi22
Best friends with one loving the other a little differently without the reciprocated feelings. Very touching and sad poem about the kind of love that never develops into more. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Best friends with one loving the other a little differently without the reciprocated feelings. Very touching and sad poem about the kind of love that never develops into more. Very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for your kind review. It was interesting writing from the other gender. That was a first and I was afraid that it would read too feminine. Have a great day.
Comment from TPAC
Interesting thoughts captured in this write, if consider right what a blow. Delightful array of views holding thought-provoking ideals.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Interesting thoughts captured in this write, if consider right what a blow. Delightful array of views holding thought-provoking ideals.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for your kind review. It was interesting writing from the other gender. That was a first and I was afraid that it would read too feminine. Have a great day.
Comment from rockinm76233
How sad to love from afar. I hope she someday knows how much you love her. Have you told her? If not then you should. I believe that sometimes we only get one true love in a lifetime. Some may get more, lucky others, but I think one great love in a lifetime is sufficient. If she doesn't know how you feel about her please don't let that be a regret for you someday. Enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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How sad to love from afar. I hope she someday knows how much you love her. Have you told her? If not then you should. I believe that sometimes we only get one true love in a lifetime. Some may get more, lucky others, but I think one great love in a lifetime is sufficient. If she doesn't know how you feel about her please don't let that be a regret for you someday. Enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for your kind review. It was interesting writing from the other gender. That was a first and I was afraid that it would read too feminine. Have a great day.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
You did a very good job with this 'love bites' poem. Good tone to the piece engendering just the right amount of feeling and longing without going overboard. Good flow to the piece.
Best of luck
GMG
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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Hi there,
You did a very good job with this 'love bites' poem. Good tone to the piece engendering just the right amount of feeling and longing without going overboard. Good flow to the piece.
Best of luck
GMG
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for your kind review. It was interesting writing from the other gender. That was a first and I was afraid that it would read too feminine. Have a great day.
Comment from William Ross
I feel this, reminds of a girl I grew up with, I was so in love with her, but to her I was a brother not a lover. We are still friends today, I still love her though in a different way. have a good day
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I feel this, reminds of a girl I grew up with, I was so in love with her, but to her I was a brother not a lover. We are still friends today, I still love her though in a different way. have a good day
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for your kind review. It was interesting writing from the other gender. That was a first and I was afraid that it would read too feminine. Have a great day.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem. I enjoyed reading it and found the poem very entertaining as, both, a story and a poem. I hope you do well in this contest and thank you for posting this poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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This is a good poem. I enjoyed reading it and found the poem very entertaining as, both, a story and a poem. I hope you do well in this contest and thank you for posting this poem.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for your kind review. It was interesting writing from the other gender. That was a first and I was afraid that it would read too feminine. Have a great day.
Comment from WalkerMan
This definitely does happen, both to men and women. Obsession with anyone (or any thing) can have unfortunate consequences for a lifetime. The meter is irregular, but the rhymes work well. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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This definitely does happen, both to men and women. Obsession with anyone (or any thing) can have unfortunate consequences for a lifetime. The meter is irregular, but the rhymes work well. Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I thank you for your review and suggestion. I will check out the meter again and see if I can see what you do. Sometimes it sounds good to me and then my reviewers can find out the irregularities and I appreciate the suggestions. thanks again and have a great day.
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You're welcome. Since you fixed the typo, I have revised the review. If you make further changes, please tell me and I'll look again. -- Mike
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is definitely sad, and it is also very well written.
There are few things more frustrating than unrequited love. However, a lot of it could be rectified and avoided if one or the other of the two parties involved would simply let the other know how they truly felt about them.
Well done.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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This is definitely sad, and it is also very well written.
There are few things more frustrating than unrequited love. However, a lot of it could be rectified and avoided if one or the other of the two parties involved would simply let the other know how they truly felt about them.
Well done.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2016
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I do thank you for your kind review. It was interesting writing from the other gender. That was a first and I was afraid that it would read too feminine. Have a great day.