White Lightning
Sunshine to moonshine100 total reviews
Comment from Cynthia1
Loved this delightful take on "moonshine". So clever! The illustration is wonderful as well. It mirrors the joy and the brightness of the sunny day- and the moonshine, oh my! Nice work.
Cynthia1
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Loved this delightful take on "moonshine". So clever! The illustration is wonderful as well. It mirrors the joy and the brightness of the sunny day- and the moonshine, oh my! Nice work.
Cynthia1
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much, Cynthia1, for taking time to read my little, silly poem. It's hard for even me to imagine how I started off writing about the sun and the moon, and ended up sidetracked on moonshine. LOL! Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
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You are welcome
Comment from jusylee72
so darling and comedic. You do a great job of making this three line poem have fun and humor and that is not easy to do . Thank you for that. Moonshine and sunshine will never feel the same.
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so darling and comedic. You do a great job of making this three line poem have fun and humor and that is not easy to do . Thank you for that. Moonshine and sunshine will never feel the same.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much, JusyLee72, for taking time to read my poem. It's even hard for me to imagine how I started off writing about the sun and the moon, and ended up sidetracked on moonshine. LOL! I can hardly thank you enough for that one sentence that will make your review so memorable to me. "Moonshine and sunshine will never be the same." You've put a bigger smile on my face than the one I intended for you. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from Bill O'Bier
A delightful and fun read. You've written a great little poem with lots of mirth. Thanks so much for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Wishing you the best--
Bill~
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A delightful and fun read. You've written a great little poem with lots of mirth. Thanks so much for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Wishing you the best--
Bill~
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much, Bill, for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. It's even amazing to me how I started off writing about the sun and the moon, and ended up sidetracked on moonshine. I appreciate you! :-)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
LOL! This surpasses the contest requirements since you have covered both the sun and the moon in the allotted syllables. I loved the approach as nobody else went for humor and this is truly a nice break in between all the serious reads. You took a risk and I hope it pays off for you. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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LOL! This surpasses the contest requirements since you have covered both the sun and the moon in the allotted syllables. I loved the approach as nobody else went for humor and this is truly a nice break in between all the serious reads. You took a risk and I hope it pays off for you. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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This is one of those great reviews that all writers hope to get. Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from TPAC
The drink certainly has its statement of feeling its rising sun so to speak within you. Ya-hoo effect. I don't think this write presented state captures thought; yet holds items for stir.
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The drink certainly has its statement of feeling its rising sun so to speak within you. Ya-hoo effect. I don't think this write presented state captures thought; yet holds items for stir.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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It's even hard for me to imagine how I started out writing about the sun and the moon, and ended up sidetracked on moonshine. But of course, I won't say it hasn't happen before. Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from Bollie
What a creative, clever and very funny poem. You really did a great job. This is a perfect contest entry. I like how you used both moonshine and sunshine. Really good job!!! Best of luck in the contest.
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What a creative, clever and very funny poem. You really did a great job. This is a perfect contest entry. I like how you used both moonshine and sunshine. Really good job!!! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much, Bollie, for taking it to read my poem. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
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You're very welcome. Have a wonderful day.
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You're very welcome. Have a wonderful day.
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You're very welcome. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from EricBrady
I thought your syllable count was off with the second line, so, I went to see Webster, nope. It was spot on, my mid Georgia speak was kicking in. Excellent 5-7-5 with the nature topic and a play on words to boot. Best of all, a good laugh. Best wishes with the contest.
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I thought your syllable count was off with the second line, so, I went to see Webster, nope. It was spot on, my mid Georgia speak was kicking in. Excellent 5-7-5 with the nature topic and a play on words to boot. Best of all, a good laugh. Best wishes with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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That syllable count played with me, too, Eric. I changed it back and forth for a while. Thank you so much for taking time to read my poem. Your kind words and extra special six-star review are greatly appreciated; but most all, I'm glad whenever I can give someone a reason to laugh or smile and maybe lighten their mind's load for a bit. Us southern boys might know a little more about moonshine than most. I'm happy you like it. :-)
Comment from William Ross
haha very good captured the sunshine and the moonshine in here both, good write and wit on this, good luck and have a great day
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haha very good captured the sunshine and the moonshine in here both, good write and wit on this, good luck and have a great day
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much, William Ross, for taking time to read my poem. I just can't for the life of my figure out why us southern boys can get to talking about the sun and the moon, and then end up thinking about moonshine. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHAHAHA! Now if it wasn't for the picture, I might have taken this as romantic, so it fits the contest requirements with a fun double entendre - clever satori. Best of luck!
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HAHAHAHAHAHA! Now if it wasn't for the picture, I might have taken this as romantic, so it fits the contest requirements with a fun double entendre - clever satori. Best of luck!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much, Dawn, for taking time to read my poem. You know, you probably don't realize that you have played a big part in me piddling around with even these simpler forms of poetry, because when I started reading your poems every day, along with a few others, I had never read a piece of poetry in my life. And truthfully, never thought I wanted to. But the more I read, the more little things stuck in my head that, I think have even helped my prose too. I explained when I stopped reading your daily posts that I just couldn't keep up with all the prose and poems, which was and is true, but now I'm starting to want to learn more about it. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
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You're very welcome. (but now, of course, I want to know who this is)! I hope you'll let me know when the contest is over. :)
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There is an easy way to find out who this is, but of course, I can't say and break the rules. LOL!
Comment from NJK62
I loved the witty and creativity of this. The climax to the poem is brilliant, with its play on the word 'moonshine' to mean liquor. A wonderfully funny celebration of the effects of alcohol. This must do well in the competition, if there is any justice. Nigel.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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I loved the witty and creativity of this. The climax to the poem is brilliant, with its play on the word 'moonshine' to mean liquor. A wonderfully funny celebration of the effects of alcohol. This must do well in the competition, if there is any justice. Nigel.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2016
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Thank you so much, Nigel, for taking time to read my poem. It's hard to imagine why I would be thinking about the sun and the moon and end up writing about moonshine. LOL! Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
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Pleasure. Loved the poem. Nigel.
