Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. This is a cool story, told in the perspective of the daffodil. a creative idea and written in a marvelous manner. I didn't spot any errors. Good work.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thanks so much for your kind review.

Comment from Saramac

Excellent

What a lovely, heartwarming story. How clever to take us into the mind of a daffodil bulb which blossoms into the gorgeous flower it always knew it would be.
My favourite entry so far.

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image.
-Story is very good and exactly 100 words.
-I like how you take on the voice of the bulb.
-Descriptions and thoughts are creative as you do this:
"I was small and brown. I was round like an onion."
-It made me think 'what did an onion have to do with a daffodil?!'
-Good development as the bulb grows.
-One day it was a beautiful, bright yellow,
and a child noticed.
-The daffodil was very pleased.
-Good entry; good luck.
-A very minor thing; I don't see a period after the last sentence.

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2016

Thanks for reading . I'll add that period immediately .

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Sep-2016

You are very welcome. I really like your story.