Your Special Ways
Kyrielle Sonnet45 total reviews
Comment from Bill O'Bier
A beautiful sonnet- passionate and enticing images. The words of your poem are expressive.. Thanks for sharing this fine piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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A beautiful sonnet- passionate and enticing images. The words of your poem are expressive.. Thanks for sharing this fine piece.
Wishing you all the best...
Bill
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Thanks for reading and the review Bill...much appreciated!!
Comment from Jackarrie
I have yet to write a poem in this form, You have written a beautiful poem that is a joy to read, the image goes so well with the sonnet.
Good luck
Mary
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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I have yet to write a poem in this form, You have written a beautiful poem that is a joy to read, the image goes so well with the sonnet.
Good luck
Mary
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Thank you so much for reading and the great review!
Comment from Nika2016
So feminine ..cream on
lavender silk...
A very nice love poem
that plays with sensuality
and succeeds...
Nice work.
A level all its own...
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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So feminine ..cream on
lavender silk...
A very nice love poem
that plays with sensuality
and succeeds...
Nice work.
A level all its own...
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Thank you for such kind words...so very much appreciated!!!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Your Special Ways" is an exceptionally well-written piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. The description is deftly carried out. A lesson for so many of us
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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"Your Special Ways" is an exceptionally well-written piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. The description is deftly carried out. A lesson for so many of us
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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You are so very kind! Thanks you for reading and this encouraging review!
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susanjohn, you're very welcome. I look forward to reading your next piece.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from DonandVicki
I can feel the passion and emotion in your writing. I think that the artwork that you chose complements your well structured poetic verse.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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I can feel the passion and emotion in your writing. I think that the artwork that you chose complements your well structured poetic verse.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Thank you for this wonderful review!! I appreciate you reading!! thanks, again
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Though I am not skilled in this form, I feel you have written a lovely sonnet that is alluring, romantic and sexy. It seems to be a difficult style but you have produced something lovely, Giddy
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Though I am not skilled in this form, I feel you have written a lovely sonnet that is alluring, romantic and sexy. It seems to be a difficult style but you have produced something lovely, Giddy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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thank you so much for this great review!! I truly appreciate you taking the time to read!! have a wonderful day!
Comment from rspoet
This is a beautiful Kyrielle sonnet
correct to the form in rhymes and repeat lines
excellent descriptive writing and imagery
not the slightest doubt of joy and passion in this poem
Great art work to match poem
One small note: if this were in a contest
the meter of line three might be questioned
"Melt" would normally be stressed
It could easily be changed by starting with "then'
and altering a few words to maintain the meter
I've no sixes left but this is
Very well done
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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This is a beautiful Kyrielle sonnet
correct to the form in rhymes and repeat lines
excellent descriptive writing and imagery
not the slightest doubt of joy and passion in this poem
Great art work to match poem
One small note: if this were in a contest
the meter of line three might be questioned
"Melt" would normally be stressed
It could easily be changed by starting with "then'
and altering a few words to maintain the meter
I've no sixes left but this is
Very well done
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Oh thank you so much for this wonderful review!!! trying so hard to get this right!!! so always appreciate any help!!! :-)))
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like your choice of image.
-Good poem with good format.
-Repeated lines are good, especially at the end.
-You show the passion she has with very good imagery:
"Melt into me and set my soul ablaze"
-Your word choice is excellent.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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-I like your choice of image.
-Good poem with good format.
-Repeated lines are good, especially at the end.
-You show the passion she has with very good imagery:
"Melt into me and set my soul ablaze"
-Your word choice is excellent.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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6????? you are so sweet!!! thank you so very much..I glad you enjoyed it
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You are quite welcome; I did enjoy your poem.
Comment from jlsavell
Susan John, this is such a sensual emotive work of art. Tastefully divine. Beautifully executed. I am not familiar with this type of sonnet and I admire any poet who can write one well. Bravo to you... jlsavell
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Susan John, this is such a sensual emotive work of art. Tastefully divine. Beautifully executed. I am not familiar with this type of sonnet and I admire any poet who can write one well. Bravo to you... jlsavell
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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You are so sweet!!! thank you for such a great review!!
Comment from Irish Rain
Lovely sonnet, a love poem to be sure. Loved the stunning art work you chose also. The refrain, 'your special ways' is awesome. Blessings....
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Lovely sonnet, a love poem to be sure. Loved the stunning art work you chose also. The refrain, 'your special ways' is awesome. Blessings....
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Thank you for reading and the great review!!! I do appreciate it!
