Your Special Ways
Kyrielle Sonnet45 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Hi Susan. Absolutely love the soft tones and sensuous motion of the artwork, that can only lead to good things in your Kyrielle Sonnet.
Yes, and you open with the breathless love making and develop that theme well until at last, spent and in each other's arms until those joys return.
Lovely meter and rhymes and oh so romantic sonnet. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Hi Susan. Absolutely love the soft tones and sensuous motion of the artwork, that can only lead to good things in your Kyrielle Sonnet.
Yes, and you open with the breathless love making and develop that theme well until at last, spent and in each other's arms until those joys return.
Lovely meter and rhymes and oh so romantic sonnet. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Gloria!!! Thank you dear..I'm really trying to focus more now with my writings....and i have sooooo developed a love for this form!!! Glad you enjoyed it
Comment from Joan E.
The artwork you selected established the mood well for your love sonnet. I admired your rhymes and repeats that made the poem all the more evocative. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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The artwork you selected established the mood well for your love sonnet. I admired your rhymes and repeats that made the poem all the more evocative. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Hi Joan! Thank you for reading and this great review!!
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS. Whoa lady! Looks like a hit record. Live the way chorus repeats adding emphasis on this erotic encounter. Romantic and filled with such strong longing and tenderness. Your display of verses flows and tells an intimate story. liberty justice
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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SIX STARS. Whoa lady! Looks like a hit record. Live the way chorus repeats adding emphasis on this erotic encounter. Romantic and filled with such strong longing and tenderness. Your display of verses flows and tells an intimate story. liberty justice
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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:-) 6 stars!! Thank you!!...hey, how are you?...i sent you a pm a while back...hope things are getting better.
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Thank you so much. I still have the same issues--just struggling to survive and stay alive!
Comment from johnwilson
This is well done! I love the constant refrain of"ensure your longings-for your special ways. You say this line and then explain how with the rest of the poem. Nicely done and I like the picture you chose to illuminate the piece.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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This is well done! I love the constant refrain of"ensure your longings-for your special ways. You say this line and then explain how with the rest of the poem. Nicely done and I like the picture you chose to illuminate the piece.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2016
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Awe thanks for reading and this great review!! Very much appreciated!!
Comment from Mastery
Hello, Susan. This is an outstanding sonnet. My only regret is I have no sixes left to award you for it. I loved all of it, but especially this stanza:
"Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways"
Bravo! :) Bob
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Hello, Susan. This is an outstanding sonnet. My only regret is I have no sixes left to award you for it. I loved all of it, but especially this stanza:
"Between the rise and breathless free-fall, when...
My urging's heat persuades you; once again
Collapse together under starlit haze
Ensure the longings ~ for your special ways"
Bravo! :) Bob
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Hi Bob! glad you liked this!! thanks for reading and the great review!! Much appreciated! :-))
Comment from royowen
A nicely written Kyrielle sonnet Susanjohn. I like the way you have approached the scribing of this work. Tastefully rendered, the subject form might be restricted, but this is both tasteful and elegantly written, serving up a subtle and gentle work. Nice flow, with appropriate rhyming in the narrative, well done, excellent, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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A nicely written Kyrielle sonnet Susanjohn. I like the way you have approached the scribing of this work. Tastefully rendered, the subject form might be restricted, but this is both tasteful and elegantly written, serving up a subtle and gentle work. Nice flow, with appropriate rhyming in the narrative, well done, excellent, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Thanks Roy!! glad you enjoyed this... what do you mean restricted??? do i need to correct something?
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No, it was perfect, the form can be difficult to negotiated well done
Comment from Venetian2
Yeah, that's what I'm talkin' about! Passion and romance in a delicious cloud of sunlit joy. I don't know if you could tolerate me as a friend, but we certainly share a romantic nature and like some of the same things.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Yeah, that's what I'm talkin' about! Passion and romance in a delicious cloud of sunlit joy. I don't know if you could tolerate me as a friend, but we certainly share a romantic nature and like some of the same things.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Tolerate you as a friend?? Silly! of course I can...Thanks for reading and the review!! much appreciated! (ps you're not that difficult to tolerate! )
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Glad to hear it, Susan. I used to be pretty awkward socially, but I'm cured now. At least I think I am.
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Hi Gloria,
Thanks, but where is it?
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I thought that what I said made sense. I wasn't being kind, I was being sincere.
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i know that.... you called me gloria...that's what i was questioning
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Eh, sometimes I write faster than I think.
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no worries, your in good company.
Comment from William Ross
very good on the kyrielle sonnet I like the repeat line on this the rhyming is great reads wonderful. best of luck on this and have a great day.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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very good on the kyrielle sonnet I like the repeat line on this the rhyming is great reads wonderful. best of luck on this and have a great day.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Awe thanks so much for reading and the review!! always appreciate!!
Comment from Ronni
Gorgeous and thoroughly enchanting and sensuously raptured poem,
and I love the repeated theme....'for your special ways'' enhanced
so enticingly in picture. Has a sweetly musical sway to tone and
theme, perfect for these lovers exhilarating love odyssey.
thanks for sharing....keep writing more...more!
Best always, Ronni
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Gorgeous and thoroughly enchanting and sensuously raptured poem,
and I love the repeated theme....'for your special ways'' enhanced
so enticingly in picture. Has a sweetly musical sway to tone and
theme, perfect for these lovers exhilarating love odyssey.
thanks for sharing....keep writing more...more!
Best always, Ronni
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Ronni!! thank you for reading and this wonderful review!!! very much appreciated!! aannddd I have another idea!!! thanks for this sweet review!!! and 6 stars!! oh my!
Comment from Quantum Traveler
A Masterful Writing Susan.
The Presentation of this Exquisite Painting flows right into the essence of the writing where the delicacy of a sensual touch quickens the heartbeat melting the two into one awakening all the senses to a crescendo of fire and passion with a finale resulting in a levitation of ecstasy resulting once again to the resting of a silent heartbeat for the two and the one.
A Beautiful cohesion of the Painting and the Writing.
Very Well Done...Susan...Very Well Done...Quantum Traveler...Phil
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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A Masterful Writing Susan.
The Presentation of this Exquisite Painting flows right into the essence of the writing where the delicacy of a sensual touch quickens the heartbeat melting the two into one awakening all the senses to a crescendo of fire and passion with a finale resulting in a levitation of ecstasy resulting once again to the resting of a silent heartbeat for the two and the one.
A Beautiful cohesion of the Painting and the Writing.
Very Well Done...Susan...Very Well Done...Quantum Traveler...Phil
Comment Written 15-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2016
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Hi Phil! thank you so much for reading and the wonderful review!!!..Actually this review might be better then the poem!!! OMG!! heheh thanks you!
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Well Susan this was an "Outstanding" piece of Artistically Arranged Presentation and I couldn't find a "10" anywhere all I had left was a "6" and that was the highest I found on the chart.
Your Presentation here and Dance of the Fire by Pam are two exceptional pieces of work that just melted together.
The Best to You.
If I can get my photo to jump into sync I will post a new writing shorty...Q.T...Phil
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oh you are sweet! I'll watch for your posting for sure :-)
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Thank you Susan...Q.T.
