To Last Forever
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Special made Men"Poems by Michael
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Comment from Ricky1024
Well written poet..
Adjective Content was wonderful as well as Objective Content.
And, on a scale of one to one hundred.....
100+.
Ricky
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Well written poet..
Adjective Content was wonderful as well as Objective Content.
And, on a scale of one to one hundred.....
100+.
Ricky
Comment Written 29-Oct-2016
Comment from amada
I like the story entwined with the sweetest figs from the Mediterranean! You know, in my paternal grandma house in the country side there was a big huge fig tree. So I was thrown away but this memory. Very well written poem, sweet friend.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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I like the story entwined with the sweetest figs from the Mediterranean! You know, in my paternal grandma house in the country side there was a big huge fig tree. So I was thrown away but this memory. Very well written poem, sweet friend.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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the sweetest figs...come from Mediterranean trees...I know...you. -smile-...how are you Happy....you look marvelous....-headwag-....well memories are made by us...and everyday holds the hope of a adoption. it sure is good to see you. love you Michael
Comment from angel123
Your poem is interesting and well written. It flows well with thought and your artwork choice goes well with your words. I enjoy reading it and have no suggestions for any changes.
Angel123
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Your poem is interesting and well written. It flows well with thought and your artwork choice goes well with your words. I enjoy reading it and have no suggestions for any changes.
Angel123
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Hi Angel...-smile-
well thank you....I know its a lil' different.
but I'm out there I guess....thank you though....love Michael
Comment from djsaxon
My dear Michael. You have the most remarkable voice, but you know that already. Not gonna critique per se. Impeccable on so many levels. Stay true. - DJ
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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My dear Michael. You have the most remarkable voice, but you know that already. Not gonna critique per se. Impeccable on so many levels. Stay true. - DJ
Comment Written 28-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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ah you aught to hear me acopella ....its a mixture of Acapoco and I'm telling ya...aha...hey Dis...-smile-...well brother when "they" start paying...were gettin' out here man...-headnod-...hang on shouldn't be long now....love michael
Comment from Joan E.
I never thought about the two sexes that way! I enjoyed your title, special use of "I" and the circularity, along with the beautiful pictures. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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I never thought about the two sexes that way! I enjoyed your title, special use of "I" and the circularity, along with the beautiful pictures. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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vell ello shoun....-eyebatting-
have the heavens sprinkled stardust down...or is it vo...Mademoiselle...who enchants all. -headtilt-....thank you Dear...love you-
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Eyes batting back at you! Sweet dreams and have a lovely weekend- Joan
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Mike. This is some powerful and emotional poetry, my friend. I like the theme and how you handled it. Especially these lines:
"lightning captured and slow
calm the storm came...
thundering"
Strong use of verbs, Michael. Bob
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Hi, Mike. This is some powerful and emotional poetry, my friend. I like the theme and how you handled it. Especially these lines:
"lightning captured and slow
calm the storm came...
thundering"
Strong use of verbs, Michael. Bob
Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2016
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Hey Bob...-smile-
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whoops....wow...that was just like Tigers....did they retire the whole team when Sparky went to heaven....aha...thank you Sir...love Michael
Comment from royowen
I think God did men a huge favour by creating Eve, but also bought him a packet load of trouble in the process, women eh? Can't live with them
M, but can't live without them either. Beautifully written Michael, this words are articulate and elegant, sweetly composed and delightful to read, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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I think God did men a huge favour by creating Eve, but also bought him a packet load of trouble in the process, women eh? Can't live with them
M, but can't live without them either. Beautifully written Michael, this words are articulate and elegant, sweetly composed and delightful to read, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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aha...yea...theres some truth...until you find her.
Hey Roy...-smile-
thank you just let the song take me. appreciate ya Boss. love Michael
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Most welcome
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, beautiful love poem...calm the storm came...thundering... and I love the song...wild is the wind... carrying my love for you...you make me feel special...very beautifully written...in your own wonderful style...and I love your picture...love you....Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, beautiful love poem...calm the storm came...thundering... and I love the song...wild is the wind... carrying my love for you...you make me feel special...very beautifully written...in your own wonderful style...and I love your picture...love you....Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
Comment from Ira White
The restatement of the first verse in the last verse ties the poem up into a nice, neat little package. I felt there were a couple of word usage problems. "in the blink of an I," is one. It should read, "eye," instead. "Sought for then," should have the word, "than," rather than then.
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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The restatement of the first verse in the last verse ties the poem up into a nice, neat little package. I felt there were a couple of word usage problems. "in the blink of an I," is one. It should read, "eye," instead. "Sought for then," should have the word, "than," rather than then.
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Well Ira....your thoughts of word usage problems...have been duly noted....and disagreed with. K sera love Michael
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. It's good to find another Michigander on this site. I was born and raised in the small town of Shelby, Michigan. You do a great job with your poetry.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Excellent. It's good to find another Michigander on this site. I was born and raised in the small town of Shelby, Michigan. You do a great job with your poetry.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2016
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2016
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Shelby township...?
hi...-smile-
well pleasure to meet you. I'm Michael. some of my family still live in Ferndale. my stepmother and younger brother Kevin...good to meet you. love Michael
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Oceana cCounty is where Shelby is located. It's one of those small towns that are easy to miss.
