Gorillas in the Mist
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Comment from winnona
A well written contest entry. Your photo and background color completed the piece well. Gorillas have a special lace in my heart nicely written. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
A well written contest entry. Your photo and background color completed the piece well. Gorillas have a special lace in my heart nicely written. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from l.raven
HI June, I just wrote in another poem...that if we don't stop killing off our wildlife...we are going to be in trouble...we are all on a chain of life...I believe breaking that chain is dangerous...very well written...and yes they are majestic beauties...a beautiful picture....love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
HI June, I just wrote in another poem...that if we don't stop killing off our wildlife...we are going to be in trouble...we are all on a chain of life...I believe breaking that chain is dangerous...very well written...and yes they are majestic beauties...a beautiful picture....love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your kind comments.
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you are so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from Liberty Justice
Ah, now. Perhaps we should write the game wardens, zoos and government officials to save the gorillas and protect other wildlife. We can start this petition. Just saw your contest entry. Congrats and good luck. Love the photo. Scientists say humans were fashioned after gorillas smilar eyes ears, legs, arms, etc. liberty justice
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
Ah, now. Perhaps we should write the game wardens, zoos and government officials to save the gorillas and protect other wildlife. We can start this petition. Just saw your contest entry. Congrats and good luck. Love the photo. Scientists say humans were fashioned after gorillas smilar eyes ears, legs, arms, etc. liberty justice
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your insightful review. We need to learn to share this lovely planet of ours.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is beautiful the picture you have chosen works perfectly and the syllable count is correct I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
Yes this is beautiful the picture you have chosen works perfectly and the syllable count is correct I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much!
Comment from loismddavis
with a perfect Haiku you have followed the prompt and brought us a great little poem that illuminates the tragedy of the loss of so many and especially the Gorilla . accompanied by a perfect picture--I enjoyed reading your little poem
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
with a perfect Haiku you have followed the prompt and brought us a great little poem that illuminates the tragedy of the loss of so many and especially the Gorilla . accompanied by a perfect picture--I enjoyed reading your little poem
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Daniel Silverhawk
Nice poem. Good flow. Good 5-7-5 format. I thought there might be a misprint in the title. Gorillas in the Mist ( or in the Midst)?
I'm not sure the instructions allowed for a picture. Good luck
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
Nice poem. Good flow. Good 5-7-5 format. I thought there might be a misprint in the title. Gorillas in the Mist ( or in the Midst)?
I'm not sure the instructions allowed for a picture. Good luck
Comment Written 03-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016
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Thank you.