Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is a great 3 line poem, my friend. It conforms to the syllable count and since we believe in eternal life, know that death should not be feared. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016

Thanks Debbie, for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written three line poem. Many people fear death because it is an unknown concept for them, they cling on this life unknowing that there is a better life waiting.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016

Thanks Sandra for these marvellous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

A very nice 3-line poem. How right you are...death is only the beginning of glorious things in store for those that love the Lord. I'm sure that "doubts" reaction won't get to experience the new beginning. haha. A very nice poem.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016

Thanks for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Roy,
This is an awesome message in a poem. Good job on the contest criteria. Your 3 lines really put those doubters in a position that they better shape up soon or face the consequences.

Good job & best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016

Thanks Jan, for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from joannakruk

Excellent

Ahh the wholesome view of life being cyclical in nature, recreating presence but not necessarily the exact self. Playing devil's advocate, we question the afterlife and our notion of self rather than having faith in the promise of peace. Inspiring message.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016

Thanks Joanna, for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from winnona

Excellent

a well written contest entry. I think you did well completing the challenge of the contest. Your words flow well combining and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016

Thanks for these generous comments and most encouraging review, blessings, Roy

Comment from damommy

Excellent

So many fear death. I wonder if they truly believe what's waiting for them.

Your poem shows me that you feel the same as I do, and know it's just another part of life. The best part.

You said a lot in so few words. 8-)

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016

Thanks so much for these great comments and review, blessings, Roy

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Death is not the end
it's simply new beginnings
just where is doubt's reaction. ...I like it its obviously a poem about faith and the afterlife only 3 lines but it says it all
dip

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016

Thanks Dip, for being good to me. Blessings, Roy

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Very nice work with this one. So true. Death is not the end, but really the beginning. I love your last line...superb poem with a powerful message, as always. Excellent 3 line poem. I wish you all the best in the contest too.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016

Thanks so much Sasha, for these great comments and review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned about death. It is so true if we trust and believe in God we do not have to worry about death as we will be with the Lord when we die! Great job. Teri

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 Comment Written 04-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016

Thanks so much Teri, for these great comments and review, blessings, Roy