Bridges
Over troubled waters...6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem uses the words well to let us all know what we need to do to make the
world a safer happier place.
Congrats on winning the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
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This poem uses the words well to let us all know what we need to do to make the
world a safer happier place.
Congrats on winning the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 13-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much!
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You are so very welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Great writing!!! Easy to see why it placed first in the contest. A strong and sound message in your written words. Lovely presentation. Good use of the required words! Very much enjoyed this work. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Great writing!!! Easy to see why it placed first in the contest. A strong and sound message in your written words. Lovely presentation. Good use of the required words! Very much enjoyed this work. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 11-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review!
Comment from RYME4U
This is a very well written poem. You have used the required words and You have rhymed it well.I like th flow of the rhyme and the rhythm is smooth, Good job!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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This is a very well written poem. You have used the required words and You have rhymed it well.I like th flow of the rhyme and the rhythm is smooth, Good job!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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Thank you very much.
Comment from William Ross
This is good, great job on using the words in this well rhymed and rhythmed poem. good luck on this and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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This is good, great job on using the words in this well rhymed and rhythmed poem. good luck on this and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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Thank you!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. You send a great message to the readers with this writing. There is too much hatred in this world today; look at our election. I didn't find any errors. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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Excellent. You send a great message to the readers with this writing. There is too much hatred in this world today; look at our election. I didn't find any errors. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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Thank you!
Comment from Darlin_Tessah
Woow. Simply fantastic. In so short a poem, you talk about the need to stand together and to unite instead of standing in isolation, which you employed by the use of "walls." I like you rhyming pattern and the fact the each line flows right into the next perfectly. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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Woow. Simply fantastic. In so short a poem, you talk about the need to stand together and to unite instead of standing in isolation, which you employed by the use of "walls." I like you rhyming pattern and the fact the each line flows right into the next perfectly. Keep it up.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words!
