Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Maria, I don't really understand a drabble flash fiction, but what I think is you may have achieved the task with this, Good luck in the contest. Patricia

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Me neither, to be frank. From the explanation it seemed just like normal flash fiction, but the word limit was between 98 and 102 words.
Thanks for reading.

reply by patcelaw on 12-Nov-2016

I looked up the word drabble and here it is defined:
A drabble is a short work of fiction of around one hundred words in length. The purpose of the drabble is brevity, testing the author's ability to express interesting and meaningful ideas in a confined space.

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks, Patricia.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Oh so charming and imaginative. Loved it. A fine entry for the
contest. Your writing is clear and interesting for the reader.
An enjoyable read. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

You captured my attention from the first line to the last,
the artwork you choose to go with your poem is a perfect match
This is what I call a food for thought poem... meaning after you read it you go mm.
Cookie

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks for reading, Cookie.

reply by misscookie on 13-Nov-2016

You're very welcome, had a blessed Sunday
Cookie

reply by misscookie on 13-Nov-2016

You're very welcome, had a blessed Sunday
Cookie

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

hahaha and off they flew into the sky lol. Great job, witty and fun good humor on this. Thanks for the share and good luck on this, enjoy your day

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

You too, William. Thanks for reading.

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Always a surprise ending Maria lol
Elves and fairies in the garden you have a very imaginative mind indeed
thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks for reading, Mark.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I still don't understand the drabble but if this is drabble it is very cute.
Nicely done going from the fairy to the elf, then changing the subject. like that works with kids...lol

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Apparently it is drabble, but I don't know what the difference with flash fiction is.
Thanks for reading.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Well done Maria, on this Drabble flash fiction, I love it. it is simple and very enjoyable. I wish you the very best of luck in the contest
Mary

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks, Mary. I'm glad you liked it. I had fun writing it.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written humorous story. Yes, we should keep our children small and feed their imagination for as long as we can. Once they lose their fantasy imagination, it is gone forever.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks for reading, Sandra. My little one found out about Santa last Christmas (well, it's the Three Wise Men here in Spain mostly) and it's very sad.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I rather liked your great little story Maria, but I guess when I read Pegasus I should have twigged, but an excellent finish, when off the flew, Heh Heh. In these short ones it has to be in the last few words, and it was, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

Thanks for reading, Roy.
These little stories are fun to write.

reply by royowen on 12-Nov-2016

They are, you do them well Maria,

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I liked this drabble. Should be well received in the competition I would have thought. Technically good write as well, which is very refreshing these days. Fun tale and content.

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2016

I'm glad you liked it, Gareth. Thanks for reading.