Being Snowed in With You
Keeps the cold outside...5 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi June. Congratulations for winning the contest with this well done
Kyrielle. There is only one small typo to correct which is: "dough nut holes" (doughnut holes). Snowy days do prompt snuggliness and cookies. Good job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
Hi June. Congratulations for winning the contest with this well done
Kyrielle. There is only one small typo to correct which is: "dough nut holes" (doughnut holes). Snowy days do prompt snuggliness and cookies. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the correction!
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And congratulations on your win! :)
Comment from Ogden
Uh oh! Big competition here! Terrific poem, June. If I didn't have my own comfy cupcake, I think I just might want to be that guy snowed in with you. ;-)
Don
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
Uh oh! Big competition here! Terrific poem, June. If I didn't have my own comfy cupcake, I think I just might want to be that guy snowed in with you. ;-)
Don
Comment Written 20-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2016
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LOL. thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from RYME4U
This is an excellent, descriptive Kyrielle. I like the bouncy rhythm and the way you set a different scene in each stanza. Great job
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
This is an excellent, descriptive Kyrielle. I like the bouncy rhythm and the way you set a different scene in each stanza. Great job
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Thank you for your kind comments!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written and presented poem. Your syllable count is spot on, your rhyming is good and I love the repeated line at the end of each stanza. Patricia.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
This is a beautifully written and presented poem. Your syllable count is spot on, your rhyming is good and I love the repeated line at the end of each stanza. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Teri7
I enjoyed reading and reviewing this great poem you have penned. You used such great descriptive wording and the art work went to well with your poem. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
I enjoyed reading and reviewing this great poem you have penned. You used such great descriptive wording and the art work went to well with your poem. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much!