silver and green
a abcb poem3 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
This is a superb and very unusual example of a silver lining. A winner to me with its originality. Thanks for sharing and best of luck.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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This is a superb and very unusual example of a silver lining. A winner to me with its originality. Thanks for sharing and best of luck.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the review. It is a true story. I was so upset when I saw the vandals had slashed all my trees, then realized you had to trim these trees, so it was a sweet silver lining for me. Cheers, j
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of the poem reminisces a reversal of sorrow to celebration over the execution of an evil intention that inadvertently brings about compliance to specifications, which could otherwise have constituted a default.
The work higlights how the unseen hand of providence rights the wrong inadvertently done to a plant's specification, which could have predisposed a poor or perverted yield.
It is an outstanding work that typically examplifies the silver lining specifications outlined by its custodians.Eureka!Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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The objective correlative of the poem reminisces a reversal of sorrow to celebration over the execution of an evil intention that inadvertently brings about compliance to specifications, which could otherwise have constituted a default.
The work higlights how the unseen hand of providence rights the wrong inadvertently done to a plant's specification, which could have predisposed a poor or perverted yield.
It is an outstanding work that typically examplifies the silver lining specifications outlined by its custodians.Eureka!Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the insightful review Lloyd. I have been reading your poems and reviews from other writers. I believe you have alot to convey, but the message is lost in overly flamboyant words. I love to hear an African prespective and poems, but I think the complex format and choice of words confuse the reviewers. Maybe try to simplify your expression. All the best to you, cheers, judester
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Thanks a lot.
Comment from Writer51
Thanks for the laughs. This is a good poem. I really liked it, because I think all of us have been in similar situations where we spas over something and it actually ends up being in our favor. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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Thanks for the laughs. This is a good poem. I really liked it, because I think all of us have been in similar situations where we spas over something and it actually ends up being in our favor. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016
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There usually is a silver lining, but people are too distracted by the dark cloud to see it. This was a beautiful case of revenge served hot. Cheers, thanks for the review, judester
