Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Wonderful combination of picture and poem. A fine entry (contender for my vote) with strong imagery and superb alliteration of B as well as good voicing.

No cap on B is fine, but I would have used a cap, personally. Just a thought.

Lovely presentation.

Good luck!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2016

Actually I had the B capitalized. Then second guessed myself! Thanks for the detailed review.

reply by rama devi on 25-Nov-2016

:-)))

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a truly beautiful monostitch you have penned for the prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and I love the picture you used for this. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

Thank you so much!

Comment from Rajasir

Excellent

'my dogma ate my homework'-what a thought-provoking line. You have said so much in these five words. It is universal and homework could be replaced by any other worldly tasks that we do in our daily lives. Truth, said so laconically, is obviously very hard to digest and many people might be critical of the word 'dogma,' but a poet knows that the surmises of readers, reviewers, and critics are often amusing to the poet.


Wonderful work!

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2016

I believe you meant to leave feedback on another poem. Mine was about I Inner Beauty.