Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Heavenly Adventure"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear jeni! i am so sorry for your loss! i love the metaphors you display. very endearing and sorrowful yet somehow hopeful.
thank you for sharing!
virtual six..
blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear jeni! i am so sorry for your loss! i love the metaphors you display. very endearing and sorrowful yet somehow hopeful.
thank you for sharing!
virtual six..
blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Thanks my friend rebekka. I accept the virtual six and am helped by your empathy.
Love,
Jeni
Comment from c_lucas
For the last three months, my life has been saved by an angel. Some day, I might write about it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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For the last three months, my life has been saved by an angel. Some day, I might write about it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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That's amazing, I'm happy you liked this poem and look forward to seeing your write about your angel
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Luna
this is a lovely poem, well presented with beautiful artwork. I love the song by Eric Clapman. Sorry about your son it is very tough to lose anyone but a child must be the worst.
I hope you are in good health and getting a quality to your day.
Mary
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Hi Luna
this is a lovely poem, well presented with beautiful artwork. I love the song by Eric Clapman. Sorry about your son it is very tough to lose anyone but a child must be the worst.
I hope you are in good health and getting a quality to your day.
Mary
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Yes, thank you. I'm happy that you enjoyed this one. I love Clapton's song about this subject, I can't listen to it without melting into a pile of tears.
Luna
Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. I enjoyed the form, and you used it well. The last two sentences combine the poem like a conclusion.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. I enjoyed the form, and you used it well. The last two sentences combine the poem like a conclusion.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2016
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Thanks, Robin, I appreciate you reading this poem and leaving such a kind review. Your attention to my work is always welcome.
Luna
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
WOW great writing here I absolutely love the picture
you have chosen it magnificent just like the write
I'm reading before me
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WOW great writing here I absolutely love the picture
you have chosen it magnificent just like the write
I'm reading before me
Comment Written 09-Dec-2016
Comment from Ben Colder
I was thinking about where Apostle Paul said he knew a man who was caught up into the third heaves. Sorry to hear about your son. I lost my son in September last year, my wife in May. Tough call for us both.
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I was thinking about where Apostle Paul said he knew a man who was caught up into the third heaves. Sorry to hear about your son. I lost my son in September last year, my wife in May. Tough call for us both.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2016
Comment from royowen
Like you, I also like that song of Eric Clapton's, I don't think I could ever recover from the loss of a child/grandchild, it would be horrific. Yes, my dear sister, when very young gave up one for adoption, and lost a dear little boy at 18 months. Beautifully written work, with marvellous imagery and wonderful, decriptive language, well done, blessings, Roy
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Like you, I also like that song of Eric Clapton's, I don't think I could ever recover from the loss of a child/grandchild, it would be horrific. Yes, my dear sister, when very young gave up one for adoption, and lost a dear little boy at 18 months. Beautifully written work, with marvellous imagery and wonderful, decriptive language, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2016
Comment from Writer51
Well done, Luna. Your words always weave magic and much thought. You have managed to succeed at that again. Very very nice.
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Well done, Luna. Your words always weave magic and much thought. You have managed to succeed at that again. Very very nice.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2016
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Such a sad poem, and another style I've not seen before. I do believe butterflies are the souls of our loved ones come to comfort us. It's so strange that you wrote this before you dear son passed, prophetic? Yes, again, I think you have insight. Excellent poem, and lovely picture too. :) Sandra. xx
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Such a sad poem, and another style I've not seen before. I do believe butterflies are the souls of our loved ones come to comfort us. It's so strange that you wrote this before you dear son passed, prophetic? Yes, again, I think you have insight. Excellent poem, and lovely picture too. :) Sandra. xx
Comment Written 08-Dec-2016
Comment from mermaids
My parents visit me in the form of two doves every year. I am glad your son visits you in the form of a butterfly. Excellent use of words, "an angel in her ear" is a marvelous line, I like the image it creates.
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My parents visit me in the form of two doves every year. I am glad your son visits you in the form of a butterfly. Excellent use of words, "an angel in her ear" is a marvelous line, I like the image it creates.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2016