Complete isolation.
But relief comes in the morning.62 total reviews
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning my dear friend, Roy: I bumped into this gem today in your portfolio. This is a very precious poem and the photo is so marvelous. I love to see the sun rises. They are so glorious. I don't know if I have ever felt such absolute aloneness because I know that God, His son and Hid Heavenly organization, they are always there looking on and He keeps paying attention.
I do know what you mean though Roy for I know that your faith is strong. That kind of aloneness is so peaceful to me, if I have ever felt it. I was happy to see that you did win with this poem. I love it. Below are just some of my favorite scriptures about feeling alone: Much love...
Isaiah 41:10 & 13 _ 10)So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God. I will strengthen you and help you; I will uphold you with my righteous right hand. 13)For I am the LORD your God who takes hold of your right hand and says to you, Do not fear; I will help you.
Psalm 73:23 - Nevertheless, I am continually with you; you hold my right hand.
Psalm 23:4 -Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
Malachi 3:16Then those who feared the LORD spoke to one another, and the LORD gave attention and heard it, and a book of remembrance was written before Him for those who fear the LORD and who esteem His name.
Luke 15:7 - I tell you that in the same way there will be more rejoicing in heaven over one sinner who repents than over ninety-nine righteous persons who do not need to repent.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Good morning my dear friend, Roy: I bumped into this gem today in your portfolio. This is a very precious poem and the photo is so marvelous. I love to see the sun rises. They are so glorious. I don't know if I have ever felt such absolute aloneness because I know that God, His son and Hid Heavenly organization, they are always there looking on and He keeps paying attention.
I do know what you mean though Roy for I know that your faith is strong. That kind of aloneness is so peaceful to me, if I have ever felt it. I was happy to see that you did win with this poem. I love it. Below are just some of my favorite scriptures about feeling alone: Much love...
Isaiah 41:10 & 13 _ 10)So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God. I will strengthen you and help you; I will uphold you with my righteous right hand. 13)For I am the LORD your God who takes hold of your right hand and says to you, Do not fear; I will help you.
Psalm 73:23 - Nevertheless, I am continually with you; you hold my right hand.
Psalm 23:4 -Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
Malachi 3:16Then those who feared the LORD spoke to one another, and the LORD gave attention and heard it, and a book of remembrance was written before Him for those who fear the LORD and who esteem His name.
Luke 15:7 - I tell you that in the same way there will be more rejoicing in heaven over one sinner who repents than over ninety-nine righteous persons who do not need to repent.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2017
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Thank you dear Tier for the marvellous encouragement and scripture sharing, The experience inspired a song, I believe God allowed me a touch of Jesus "aloneness" in bearing my sin that morning, I won't ever forget it. May you Christmas be a Beautiful one, filled with love and joy for and from loved ones. Bless you Roy and Elaine,
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Thank you dear Tier for the marvellous encouragement and scripture sharing, The experience inspired a song, I believe God allowed me a touch of Jesus "aloneness" in bearing my sin that morning, I won't ever forget it. May you Christmas be a Beautiful one, filled with love and joy for and from loved ones. Bless you Roy and Elaine,
Comment from angel123
I really enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. Your message is inspiring and uplifting. Thank you for providing the bible verse in your author notes. Your poem flows well and your artwork choice is beautiful. Happy Holidays and good luck in the contest.
angel 123
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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I really enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. Your message is inspiring and uplifting. Thank you for providing the bible verse in your author notes. Your poem flows well and your artwork choice is beautiful. Happy Holidays and good luck in the contest.
angel 123
Comment Written 13-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much for the marvellous review and comments, Blessings Roy
Comment from sunnilicious
That's sooo deep. I never thought that way... however, I have felt scared of the sun not being out yet and being awake. Good visual imagery created. Good flow of rhymes. Nice work.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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That's sooo deep. I never thought that way... however, I have felt scared of the sun not being out yet and being awake. Good visual imagery created. Good flow of rhymes. Nice work.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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Thanks Alicia for the sensational review,
Comment from cflorian8
Your poem speaks about the hardships we face daily. Sometimes these hardships become unbearable. For many, the blessings of Jesus bolsters the weakened spirit of the weary. Your poem is full of imagery and tells the story of sinners following the lord's light out of the dreary darkness that is their reality.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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Your poem speaks about the hardships we face daily. Sometimes these hardships become unbearable. For many, the blessings of Jesus bolsters the weakened spirit of the weary. Your poem is full of imagery and tells the story of sinners following the lord's light out of the dreary darkness that is their reality.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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Thanks for these lovely words and gracious review
Comment from Franklin Price
A wonderful message for an early morning read. Just complicated enough to make me think and not so complex as to lose the meaning. We may feel lonely, at times, but we are never really alone if we have faith. Great poem. I hope God has blessed you as much as this poem indicates. In addition to a great message, it is also well written.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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A wonderful message for an early morning read. Just complicated enough to make me think and not so complex as to lose the meaning. We may feel lonely, at times, but we are never really alone if we have faith. Great poem. I hope God has blessed you as much as this poem indicates. In addition to a great message, it is also well written.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much Franklin, for the marvellous review and comments,
Comment from frierajac
This is all very fine. However, please be so kind as to tell me if you actually
mean that the hope of compassion is stolen by doubt? And then the last rhying couplet wains/lain: why isn't it 'shadows wain'
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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This is all very fine. However, please be so kind as to tell me if you actually
mean that the hope of compassion is stolen by doubt? And then the last rhying couplet wains/lain: why isn't it 'shadows wain'
Comment Written 13-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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I think all things are waylaid by doubt, compassion is activated by faith, doubt restrains. Thanks for the great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from jusylee72
It would be scary to awaken in the morning and wonder if you are the only person left on earth. Glad you got through it. I thought this was a gteat oem. Thank you Judy
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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It would be scary to awaken in the morning and wonder if you are the only person left on earth. Glad you got through it. I thought this was a gteat oem. Thank you Judy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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Thanks Judy for these wonderful words and review,
Comment from Patricia Crandall
This is a beautiful poem and does make you ponder. You have described the isolation I have felt at night and I am sure many others have too. It is a gripping isolation. I am glad I have faith because that is where I turn - prayer. It softens the heavy, dark feeling and: my favorite line in this poem is - but mercy greets the dawn, on beams of brightness lain. Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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This is a beautiful poem and does make you ponder. You have described the isolation I have felt at night and I am sure many others have too. It is a gripping isolation. I am glad I have faith because that is where I turn - prayer. It softens the heavy, dark feeling and: my favorite line in this poem is - but mercy greets the dawn, on beams of brightness lain. Excellent writing.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2016
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Thanks Patricia, for these lovely words and great review,
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I can really relate to the message in your poem. There are so many reasons why, and for both the real part of darkness and for the figurative with depression. I'm sure there are many who can say the same. Your poem was well stated, direct and to the point.
Well done,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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I can really relate to the message in your poem. There are so many reasons why, and for both the real part of darkness and for the figurative with depression. I'm sure there are many who can say the same. Your poem was well stated, direct and to the point.
Well done,
Rhonda
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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Thanks Rhonda, for the super review and comments,
Comment from GentleWind
This is lovely. I loved the theme and the rhyme and visuals. My favorite character was the 'shadows spawn.' What a picture of loneliness and seeming hopelessness. Yes, the morning brings His light and hope. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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This is lovely. I loved the theme and the rhyme and visuals. My favorite character was the 'shadows spawn.' What a picture of loneliness and seeming hopelessness. Yes, the morning brings His light and hope. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much for the marvellous review and comments,
