Rescued
...by mutual love9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 poem about a pet, Rescued, tells a story in its few words and also leaves us with the true meaning of the title, Rescued. Nice.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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This 5-7-5 poem about a pet, Rescued, tells a story in its few words and also leaves us with the true meaning of the title, Rescued. Nice.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Comment from BeasPeas
It is true. It's a case of who rescued who/whom. Each animal that comes into our lives is a gift. All of mine are always rescues. There are so many who need homes. "Her love rescued us." Marilyn
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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It is true. It's a case of who rescued who/whom. Each animal that comes into our lives is a gift. All of mine are always rescues. There are so many who need homes. "Her love rescued us." Marilyn
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from winnona
a well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Good luck in the contest.well done
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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a well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Good luck in the contest.well done
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fabulous poem and a firm favourite for me, I hope you win the contest as you have my vote, wonderful few words of mutual adoration, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Fabulous poem and a firm favourite for me, I hope you win the contest as you have my vote, wonderful few words of mutual adoration, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Kitties choose you all the time. She was just hanging out at the shelter waiting for the right person--YOU.
Good job on the criteria of the contest.
Best wishes. [You are already a winner for rescuing helpless babies]. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Kitties choose you all the time. She was just hanging out at the shelter waiting for the right person--YOU.
Good job on the criteria of the contest.
Best wishes. [You are already a winner for rescuing helpless babies]. Jan
Comment Written 28-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Cass Carlton
Yes indeed, the lost and the homeless reward us in so many ways when we open our hearts and homes to them. I keep looking at the photo and thinking about what the little cat is dreaming about. Just recently we adopted two shelter cats after the death of our 8year old rabbit, and they both have taken to home life with rapturous enthusiasm. They sleep on our beds, play chasey out in the back garden, and have a wonderful time entertaining us with their (naughty) endearing personalities. Your little fur baby is lucky to have been chosen by you, but you are wise to note that the love she bestows upon you is a true blessing. cheers Cass
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Yes indeed, the lost and the homeless reward us in so many ways when we open our hearts and homes to them. I keep looking at the photo and thinking about what the little cat is dreaming about. Just recently we adopted two shelter cats after the death of our 8year old rabbit, and they both have taken to home life with rapturous enthusiasm. They sleep on our beds, play chasey out in the back garden, and have a wonderful time entertaining us with their (naughty) endearing personalities. Your little fur baby is lucky to have been chosen by you, but you are wise to note that the love she bestows upon you is a true blessing. cheers Cass
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your kind comments. It is so rewarding to take in animals who can pay us back in so many ways. Just the joy of seeing them play is a gift. I appreciate your reading and reviewing.
Comment from Stacia Ann
What a great little poem! Nice twist at the end...the pet rescues the owner. I think that is indeed true sometimes.
Lovely visually as well.
My only comment for revision
the (...by love) above the title does seem to work, a little confusing.
Maybe it should be
By love...
Rescued
Or
Perhaps just rename the poem:
Rescued (by love)
Nice work overall:)
Thank you for sharing.
Stacia
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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What a great little poem! Nice twist at the end...the pet rescues the owner. I think that is indeed true sometimes.
Lovely visually as well.
My only comment for revision
the (...by love) above the title does seem to work, a little confusing.
Maybe it should be
By love...
Rescued
Or
Perhaps just rename the poem:
Rescued (by love)
Nice work overall:)
Thank you for sharing.
Stacia
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thanks for the honest comments and helpful suggestions.
Comment from robyn corum
Awwww....this is one of the sweetest pet poems I've read in a long while. For real. I thought about entering this contest. Now. No way. Hahaha. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Awwww....this is one of the sweetest pet poems I've read in a long while. For real. I thought about entering this contest. Now. No way. Hahaha. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It has a good taletelling, reasoned event, free flow of thoughts, balanced beginning and ending, love inspiration and depiction of a pet rescue; I liked and enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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It has a good taletelling, reasoned event, free flow of thoughts, balanced beginning and ending, love inspiration and depiction of a pet rescue; I liked and enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
