The End
Enough of this stuff37 total reviews
Comment from doggymad
Well done on a fun write. It is well put together and certainly meets the requirements of the prompt.
With up to five dogs in the house, I can truly identify with this story
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Well done on a fun write. It is well put together and certainly meets the requirements of the prompt.
With up to five dogs in the house, I can truly identify with this story
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you. Yeah, the same situation could happen with a cold doggy nose. LOL
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Very funny story with out saying exactly what you were doing.
The cat saw something move and did his cat thing. OUCH!
WOW! Yes, they are cats and have to attack. Great entry.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Very funny story with out saying exactly what you were doing.
The cat saw something move and did his cat thing. OUCH!
WOW! Yes, they are cats and have to attack. Great entry.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you. Yep, cats are highly unpredictable and act on the spur of the moment. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from jusylee72
While that was definitely visual and funny in only fifty words. Very well done. Beginning and an ending and screams heard round the world along with laughter.
Judy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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While that was definitely visual and funny in only fifty words. Very well done. Beginning and an ending and screams heard round the world along with laughter.
Judy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Cats often do the unexpected, I have six of them so I know. LOL
Comment from Poetic Friend
Oh my God, this is hilarious! I am still laughing as I write this review. Funny, funny, funny! As a cat owner, I can relate to this story. Pepper probably thought he was protecting you.
Technically and with minimal words, you managed to say a lot, painted the scenery and develop the characters. The main character is Pepper, of course.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Oh my God, this is hilarious! I am still laughing as I write this review. Funny, funny, funny! As a cat owner, I can relate to this story. Pepper probably thought he was protecting you.
Technically and with minimal words, you managed to say a lot, painted the scenery and develop the characters. The main character is Pepper, of course.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. It's fun to write these short-short pieces and manage to get a story in there.
Comment from Bobbi22
Your short story does create a humorous image. I imagine a cat jumping on his bare butt sure could destroy the moment. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Your short story does create a humorous image. I imagine a cat jumping on his bare butt sure could destroy the moment. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thank you. Hope this didn't take too much of your time to read. LOL
Comment from mbroyles2
Yep that would do it.
Lovely way to present this contest entry.
I can just see that cat messing everything up.
Funny.
Great writing.
Michael
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Yep that would do it.
Lovely way to present this contest entry.
I can just see that cat messing everything up.
Funny.
Great writing.
Michael
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thank you. I hope you didn't waste too much of your time reading this. LOL Thanks for commenting.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It is a good humorous 50 word story, experience retold simply in a conversational taletelling, as per the term of production, it appears well expressed like a run on sentence, brief but likeable and I enjoyed the read for its simplicity in approach, presentation and finish.
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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It is a good humorous 50 word story, experience retold simply in a conversational taletelling, as per the term of production, it appears well expressed like a run on sentence, brief but likeable and I enjoyed the read for its simplicity in approach, presentation and finish.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2017
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Thank you. A writer has to think fast to write these short-short pieces. They are fun and a challenge.
