Hayman
a holiday I came, yet here I stay22 total reviews
Comment from BOO ghost
Nice picture broo,brings out the mariner in BOO. Man the mizzen, lugsails and jiggers! Von Bon Doge! Scurvy dogs. thanks for sharing the author notes,mate. Know where she lies now. Setting sail! Around Cape Horn. oh,BOO loves words. First,I work on my words real hard. i can spot good words bro. Words are the power! BOO's favorite quatrain: a silhouette before the sky
my fellow islands span the eye
the ocean gulfs their many ways
with all my nights and all my days
the endless sun defeats the cold
it welcomes one both young and old
a resort I house, best world wide
I strove for this with every stride
this is killer,bro! you ain't met BOO yet. I love unique words.
Can I be your First Mate? Juggernaut. pirates stole me booty. Only got five stars. firing the grapeshot over their birch bows.
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Nice picture broo,brings out the mariner in BOO. Man the mizzen, lugsails and jiggers! Von Bon Doge! Scurvy dogs. thanks for sharing the author notes,mate. Know where she lies now. Setting sail! Around Cape Horn. oh,BOO loves words. First,I work on my words real hard. i can spot good words bro. Words are the power! BOO's favorite quatrain: a silhouette before the sky
my fellow islands span the eye
the ocean gulfs their many ways
with all my nights and all my days
the endless sun defeats the cold
it welcomes one both young and old
a resort I house, best world wide
I strove for this with every stride
this is killer,bro! you ain't met BOO yet. I love unique words.
Can I be your First Mate? Juggernaut. pirates stole me booty. Only got five stars. firing the grapeshot over their birch bows.
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thanks very much it is a great resort out here in Aussie, Your words and inspiration are much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy Winter
I understand what the Island has to offer and enjoyed the rhythm of your poem but I can not see the Island thru your words. I want to know what color the reef is and what vessel you take to see the whales. Your poem is very well done and sparked my interest. Please write more about this island. A poem about the whales alone, about the reef alone, to ski in Australia: What is that like? Were there great whites around. Please forgive me for being so greedy, had a taste and it launched my appetite. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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I understand what the Island has to offer and enjoyed the rhythm of your poem but I can not see the Island thru your words. I want to know what color the reef is and what vessel you take to see the whales. Your poem is very well done and sparked my interest. Please write more about this island. A poem about the whales alone, about the reef alone, to ski in Australia: What is that like? Were there great whites around. Please forgive me for being so greedy, had a taste and it launched my appetite. Thank you.
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much, I have written about your suggestions (not yet posted) I will have to try and improve on them too ( any help would be much appreciated) to succeed in getting an upgrade from a good (4) star rating, but I will try many thanks****kahpot
Comment from pipersfancy
This is most certainly a part of the world I'd love to visit some day! There's something rather special about island living, isn't there? Thanks for sharing,
pf
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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This is most certainly a part of the world I'd love to visit some day! There's something rather special about island living, isn't there? Thanks for sharing,
pf
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes there is some thing very special if the Island is these good for guests as well as staff****kahpot
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
WHAT AN EXCELENT POEM I LOVE IT
I'M GOING TO HAVE TO GIVE YOU A VERUAL SIX
OUTSTANDING POEM
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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WHAT AN EXCELENT POEM I LOVE IT
I'M GOING TO HAVE TO GIVE YOU A VERUAL SIX
OUTSTANDING POEM
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much, Abby, a great review****kahpot
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is well written my friend with an upbeat feel through the poem I think you have said so much about this beautiful place it has so much for everybody wanting to visit or stay well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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This is well written my friend with an upbeat feel through the poem I think you have said so much about this beautiful place it has so much for everybody wanting to visit or stay well done regards Jill
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you for an excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi; it's so sad that your boss could not see the value in these words. They should have been printed somewhere in the brochure. Island resorts are wonderful vacations - they give you peace and safe harbor from the world.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Hi; it's so sad that your boss could not see the value in these words. They should have been printed somewhere in the brochure. Island resorts are wonderful vacations - they give you peace and safe harbor from the world.
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much and yes a brochure would have been great****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how gorgeous, beautiful is the Hayman Island and how comforting, hygienic, and homely are the resorts there, a perfect heavenly home away home; I liked.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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This speaks how gorgeous, beautiful is the Hayman Island and how comforting, hygienic, and homely are the resorts there, a perfect heavenly home away home; I liked.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from c_lucas
There is no answer to the quirks of Life.
What seems like a good idea, is gastronomic ego.
To write a poem, one has to know the lay of the land
Or the vocabulary is a disappointment.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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There is no answer to the quirks of Life.
What seems like a good idea, is gastronomic ego.
To write a poem, one has to know the lay of the land
Or the vocabulary is a disappointment.
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thank you for an excellent and understanding review****kahpot
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You're welcome, Kahpot. Charlie
Comment from nbonner
I loved it! I actually felt like I was on the island itself. Great imagery used and the flow of it was excellent. Thank you so much for sharing
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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I loved it! I actually felt like I was on the island itself. Great imagery used and the flow of it was excellent. Thank you so much for sharing
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written poem depicts your adventures and feelings for Hayman.
Notes, and colorful, descriptive language better illustrate this theme.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Well written poem depicts your adventures and feelings for Hayman.
Notes, and colorful, descriptive language better illustrate this theme.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
