Bee-witched
and bee-wildered7 total reviews
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of this contest very well. The words flowed well together combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. I think you completed the challenge of this contest very well. The words flowed well together combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from angel123
I really like your meaningful nature poem. It has a wonderful artwork presentation and I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
angel123
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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I really like your meaningful nature poem. It has a wonderful artwork presentation and I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
angel123
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Franklin Price
Great poem and great picture to show it off. I can see the bee thinking just that as it approaches a nectar filled flower.. Are you sure you were not a bee in some past life?
Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Great poem and great picture to show it off. I can see the bee thinking just that as it approaches a nectar filled flower.. Are you sure you were not a bee in some past life?
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Cindy Warren
I love this. It might be about a bee, or it might be more romantic. Hard to say what's drawn to that sweet flower. You may have a winner here.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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I love this. It might be about a bee, or it might be more romantic. Hard to say what's drawn to that sweet flower. You may have a winner here.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the positive feedback!
Comment from RodG
This essence poem truly captures the ESSENCE of this photograph.
Great title!
The bee is also a metaphor for those who cannot resist temptation.
Excellent rhymes chosen.
Overall, an exceptional shorty! Rod
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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This essence poem truly captures the ESSENCE of this photograph.
Great title!
The bee is also a metaphor for those who cannot resist temptation.
Excellent rhymes chosen.
Overall, an exceptional shorty! Rod
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Was hoping it wasn't too simplistic. But sometimes that's best. Thank you again!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Wow, this is so perfectly expressed, so beautifully written, in so few words you have summed up what many might take three stanzas to say! Perfectly chosen words, and a beautiful picture to accompany it, I am a big fan of Bees, Wasps I hate! Amazing job kindest regards, Meia x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Wow, this is so perfectly expressed, so beautifully written, in so few words you have summed up what many might take three stanzas to say! Perfectly chosen words, and a beautiful picture to accompany it, I am a big fan of Bees, Wasps I hate! Amazing job kindest regards, Meia x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much!
Comment from robyn corum
Well, it looks like this example of an essence poem meets all of the aforementioned criteria - so the best of luck to you in the contest voting! I looked super to me~!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Well, it looks like this example of an essence poem meets all of the aforementioned criteria - so the best of luck to you in the contest voting! I looked super to me~!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
