Golden Years
Warm memories4 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful senyru you have penned for the prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the words and art work! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
This is a very beautiful senyru you have penned for the prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the words and art work! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much for your kind words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Golden Years, uses the seventeen syllables and forms a picture of the final phase of life, enjoyed in its remembrance of the life before. Nice.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
This senryu, Golden Years, uses the seventeen syllables and forms a picture of the final phase of life, enjoyed in its remembrance of the life before. Nice.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much!
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the contest
with imagery of sunsets and love and
a very reassuring third line
Perfect art work to match the thought
Warm memories, very nicely done
Best wishes in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
This is an excellent entry for the contest
with imagery of sunsets and love and
a very reassuring third line
Perfect art work to match the thought
Warm memories, very nicely done
Best wishes in the contest
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from moonsunrise
What a wonderful poem. The imagery is beautiful and clearly portrays loves golden moments still shining in the sunset reflections.
This is the time now to slow down and enjoy quiet moments.
Best regards.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
What a wonderful poem. The imagery is beautiful and clearly portrays loves golden moments still shining in the sunset reflections.
This is the time now to slow down and enjoy quiet moments.
Best regards.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you!