Monet's Lily
...a nightly serenade5 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A beautiful reflection in every sense of the term -use of verbs heightens the stillnes s 'basking' & 'awaits'- words are such powerful tools
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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A beautiful reflection in every sense of the term -use of verbs heightens the stillnes s 'basking' & 'awaits'- words are such powerful tools
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thank you for sharing my vision!
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. Beautiful artwork and background color that completes your entry well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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A well-written contest entry. Beautiful artwork and background color that completes your entry well. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest good luck.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
ooohhhh you got my vote. Yours is the best one so far and I doubt there will be a better one. Good job my friend.
basking in moon light <> Monet's pink lily awaits <>
tree frog serenade
smooth connection between lines one and two. good syllabic count. lovely satori
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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ooohhhh you got my vote. Yours is the best one so far and I doubt there will be a better one. Good job my friend.
basking in moon light <> Monet's pink lily awaits <>
tree frog serenade
smooth connection between lines one and two. good syllabic count. lovely satori
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much! I love Monet and water lilies. So, it just came together. Appreciate your taking the time to read and review. I know you're a busy lady!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
I love your haiku abort Monet's famous pasting
Just on thing to think about which I found when writing a haiku -----
# Eliminate adverbs.
lily (eagerly) awaits
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Hello author
I love your haiku abort Monet's famous pasting
Just on thing to think about which I found when writing a haiku -----
# Eliminate adverbs.
lily (eagerly) awaits
Gert
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the suggestion. Will see how I can revise.
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it reads good
Gert
Comment from marybell1
I loved your 5-7-5 poem and choice of beautiful flower. I could just hear the frog's serenade. A lovely thought.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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I loved your 5-7-5 poem and choice of beautiful flower. I could just hear the frog's serenade. A lovely thought.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you for sharing my imaginary world!
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
