Paws
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Comment from Grasshopper2
Lady JS,
Yours should have soared above the others to obtain the win in this witty writing prompt of a poem plied with puns and plays on words. <-(Notice all of those alliterations of W and P. I know...humbling to read the likes of the Bard - haha- NOT!) Alas, I could not vote more than seven times, hence your time for first. My bad.
I enjoyed reading your ode.
Grasshopper-ing-around.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
Lady JS,
Yours should have soared above the others to obtain the win in this witty writing prompt of a poem plied with puns and plays on words. <-(Notice all of those alliterations of W and P. I know...humbling to read the likes of the Bard - haha- NOT!) Alas, I could not vote more than seven times, hence your time for first. My bad.
I enjoyed reading your ode.
Grasshopper-ing-around.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Thank you for stopping by and reviewing! Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from TPAC
Informative and clearly define subject well in its structuring , appealing aspects about the living nature of this animal. A good analysis of the creature.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
Informative and clearly define subject well in its structuring , appealing aspects about the living nature of this animal. A good analysis of the creature.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Cmelton
I like the choice of words. Great way to use the play on words. Started off a little slow but the ending is much better. I like the pun you use and love the picture.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
I like the choice of words. Great way to use the play on words. Started off a little slow but the ending is much better. I like the pun you use and love the picture.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is about the animal koalas that are vegans (vegetarians who eat plant products only) are seen engaged on eucalyptus leaves for eating; I liked and enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
This is about the animal koalas that are vegans (vegetarians who eat plant products only) are seen engaged on eucalyptus leaves for eating; I liked and enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this my friend not only did it make me smile but it is well presented too I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
Yes I liked this my friend not only did it make me smile but it is well presented too I enjoyed good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging words!
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Paws That Refresh' is a nice 5-7-5 you've penned.
Cute artwork: The image shown is a perfect match for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Witty Animal.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
'Paws That Refresh' is a nice 5-7-5 you've penned.
Cute artwork: The image shown is a perfect match for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Witty Animal.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your kind words!
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your witty 5-7-5 about an animal. Your chosen animal, the koala, is such a cute little guy. Knowing that they're vegetarians makes them even more cuddly,
~patty~
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
thank you for sharing your witty 5-7-5 about an animal. Your chosen animal, the koala, is such a cute little guy. Knowing that they're vegetarians makes them even more cuddly,
~patty~
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your positive feedback!