It Was A Very Good Year
1969,,,we were married9 total reviews
Comment from Lindagail Hall
Like the flow you have going on in this rhyme love the choice of titles you used. It's a fun write and reads out unhindered
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Like the flow you have going on in this rhyme love the choice of titles you used. It's a fun write and reads out unhindered
Comment Written 09-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. The use of song titles to tell a love story in poem form. I usually do that in letters to a lover format. Great dong titles and great rhyming to complete the whole picture.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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A very well-written poem. The use of song titles to tell a love story in poem form. I usually do that in letters to a lover format. Great dong titles and great rhyming to complete the whole picture.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the positive feedback!
Comment from Mustang Patty
this is a well told story using the song lyrics to move it along. I think this entry in the Song-title poem should do well. You used the lyrics in a way that they were part of the tale. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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this is a well told story using the song lyrics to move it along. I think this entry in the Song-title poem should do well. You used the lyrics in a way that they were part of the tale. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Jesus, is it really the year 2525!?!
Good Lord, I must have really overslept!
I doubt that I missed very much excitement, however.
Although I would like to know, have we colonized Mars or the moon yet?
If so, are they offering to take volunteers on a one-way trip there?
Just curious...
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Jesus, is it really the year 2525!?!
Good Lord, I must have really overslept!
I doubt that I missed very much excitement, however.
Although I would like to know, have we colonized Mars or the moon yet?
If so, are they offering to take volunteers on a one-way trip there?
Just curious...
Good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Well, I couldn't find a song about 2017...so I stretched it a bit.
A fun challenge - never tried it before.
And no, we haven't quite colonized - or destroyed the moon or Mars yet.
Give it time...we're doing a job on this planet so far.
Thanks for the read and review.
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I can hardly wait to go and contribute to the ruination of those heavenly bodies myself.
You're more than welcome.
~Dean
Comment from Asem.inspirations
What a fun contest. You did an excellent job and WOW! 48 years of married bliss. You two are an inspiration to us all, well to me anyway. I hope that me and my husband could be together that long. Yes, it does take survival. I hope you do very well in the contest. You should print this poem, frame it and give it to your spouse.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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What a fun contest. You did an excellent job and WOW! 48 years of married bliss. You two are an inspiration to us all, well to me anyway. I hope that me and my husband could be together that long. Yes, it does take survival. I hope you do very well in the contest. You should print this poem, frame it and give it to your spouse.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging words!
Comment from pome lover
wow. isn't your spouse the lucky one!
2525? best wishes on that one.
You're right - only the strong survive. good phrase, and true.
cute poem with heartfelt emotion. could tell you really meant it.
bravo.
pome lover
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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wow. isn't your spouse the lucky one!
2525? best wishes on that one.
You're right - only the strong survive. good phrase, and true.
cute poem with heartfelt emotion. could tell you really meant it.
bravo.
pome lover
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Thank you! It was a fun challenge to fit all my favorite songs from 1969 into the poem. Glad you enjoyed the read!
Comment from XGoneX
Hi,
This poem indeed sounded like a song. It was sweet and yet entertaining, too. Good rhyming, flow, and I liked the story very much. It's great to know that you two are still together and happy.
Only the Strong Survive -- good final line. Indeed, a marriage has its ups and downs.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Hi,
This poem indeed sounded like a song. It was sweet and yet entertaining, too. Good rhyming, flow, and I liked the story very much. It's great to know that you two are still together and happy.
Only the Strong Survive -- good final line. Indeed, a marriage has its ups and downs.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Thank you! It was a fun challenge to fit all my favorite songs from 1969 into the poem. Glad you enjoyed the read!
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I love this musical kaleidoscope and would like to join this competition myself. I love the way you have fused the song titles together and what a great idea for a comp. Superb entry good luck and keep on rocking :) x Love Meia x
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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I love this musical kaleidoscope and would like to join this competition myself. I love the way you have fused the song titles together and what a great idea for a comp. Superb entry good luck and keep on rocking :) x Love Meia x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Thank you! It was a fun challenge to fit all my favorite songs from 1969 into the poem. Glad you enjoyed the read!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This remembers 1969 year of marriage and how all these happy years passed and to continue till 2525first love continues; even today love is there same like the first year, I liked.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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This remembers 1969 year of marriage and how all these happy years passed and to continue till 2525first love continues; even today love is there same like the first year, I liked.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Thank you! It was a fun challenge to fit all my favorite songs from 1969 into the poem. Glad you enjoyed the read!
