Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

this is so down to earth
the ticker skipping beats
the apple pie crumbs
all this is truly the stuff we remember
I like how your mind pops around from thought to thought
fairies to dancers
all really good imaginative phrases
the stuff poetry is truly made of
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017

Thanks for your comments on this one. I loved writing it and it came from an old love relationship story.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Your poem is light and playful and accompanied by the perfect picture which suits it well. Good rhyme scheme throughout with 3 lines monorhyme and last line different and with 7-7-7-5 syllables showing planning. Good job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017

I thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review. Congratulations on your second place win. Yours was a winner indeed.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a simple poem filled with loving sentiments, I especially love the first stanza which says it all, I wish you luck with the contest, for me this is a winner, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017

I thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

You did a great job with this writing prompt, I think. Avoided all the taboo words.

My mouth still tingles when I spy
A crumb left on your lips - maybe a full stop at the end of this verse for consistency.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 31-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017

I thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful review. This was a fun contest.

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

You wrote an excellent love poem without any of those forbidden, overused words. But what do ferries and belly dancers have to do with anything?? :o)

Don (aka Ogden)

 Comment Written 31-May-2017

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reply by the author on 31-May-2017

Just two subjects to entice and lead you in...lol Thanks much for the kind review. This kind of contest is fun and whets the appetite.