Lotus
ABC poem.14 total reviews
Comment from Kazzawin
You've created a very nice poem with good imagery, a clear message to those disheartened in some way and a beautiful image to enhance it.
You have adhered to the rules in this ABC format and I wish you well in the contest : )
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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You've created a very nice poem with good imagery, a clear message to those disheartened in some way and a beautiful image to enhance it.
You have adhered to the rules in this ABC format and I wish you well in the contest : )
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Curly Girly
I enjoyed reading this delightful poem about the trials of a lotus flower. Created in a sullied pond, she rises above all and blooms to life in admirable, glowing splendour. Yes, it does seem like God's message to those who strive to attain success.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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I enjoyed reading this delightful poem about the trials of a lotus flower. Created in a sullied pond, she rises above all and blooms to life in admirable, glowing splendour. Yes, it does seem like God's message to those who strive to attain success.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for this glittering stars. I am pleased like a cheshire cat!!
I am hppy to know that you liked it very much.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent poem. I never thought of it that way before. You have a very upbeat attitude. There's no need for rose-colored glasses in your house.
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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This is an excellent poem. I never thought of it that way before. You have a very upbeat attitude. There's no need for rose-colored glasses in your house.
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much. I try to grab each moment of happiness that is offered to me. other wise life is just a parade of duties and disappointments!
Comment from MaggieF
Good choice of picture for your poem, it's beautiful. I think there is a message here, keep going through adversity, you will survive and blossom! I loved 'emerged she, the lotus, blooming unsullied. ' MaggieF
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Good choice of picture for your poem, it's beautiful. I think there is a message here, keep going through adversity, you will survive and blossom! I loved 'emerged she, the lotus, blooming unsullied. ' MaggieF
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much
