Comment from J. Salvatore

Excellent

Nice choice of gold touching green (and using the same for your background and text). I really like that it comes together in one word. Nice job and wishing you all the best!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thank you so much for the positive review.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how gently the world around the east at the golden sunrise touches the evergreens and a gold harmony comes into the sight, the joy of beauty harmonised; I liked.

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 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

I'm so glad you feel "harmonised" as this was my intention with this little poem Thank you for the fun review.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well, this is certainly very direct and to the point, Anonymous Poet.
Of course given the type of contest you've entered this in, you had very little choice but to be direct and to the point.
Still, you've manged to say quite a bit in just eleven syllables.


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 Comment Written 07-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2017

Thank you, Dean, I am glad you appreciate how little I had to work with. But for these little "ones" peak my interest. Thank you so much for the lovely review.

reply by Dean Kuch on 07-Jun-2017

They peak my interest too.
Hence the reasons why I write haiku poetry so often.
You're very welcome, and again, good luck!