2017 Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "haiku (delightful aroma)"A collection of my poems
12 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written and have done well for the contest I love the word satiates in the middle line it adds so much to the meaning well done good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
Yes this is well written and have done well for the contest I love the word satiates in the middle line it adds so much to the meaning well done good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words, Jill.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The desirous rose quenching the hungry senses with its aroma, delightful. I wish you luck with the Red Rose Haiku writing contest, I personally love my roses pink! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
The desirous rose quenching the hungry senses with its aroma, delightful. I wish you luck with the Red Rose Haiku writing contest, I personally love my roses pink! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much, Dolly, it's always a pleasure to read kind reviews.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. The aroma of roses are always pleasant and refreshing any time when it is their time to bloom. A great presentation and an excrkkent picture of a red rose.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
A very well-written haiku. The aroma of roses are always pleasant and refreshing any time when it is their time to bloom. A great presentation and an excrkkent picture of a red rose.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Comment from Mame
A refreshing slant on the 'red rose' haiku. The picture certainly embraced the meaning of your words. We can almost share the magnificent perfume of this red rose. Well done!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
A refreshing slant on the 'red rose' haiku. The picture certainly embraced the meaning of your words. We can almost share the magnificent perfume of this red rose. Well done!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate the review and kind words.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Poet. This is a beautiful and I have to agree that the smell of roses stays with you forever. Love the display presentation and your words. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
Hi Poet. This is a beautiful and I have to agree that the smell of roses stays with you forever. Love the display presentation and your words. Good luck in your contest. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate the review and kind words.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 6-7-3 haiku "Red Rose". You followed the rules correctly. Unfortunately not all red roses have a delightful aroma.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
I enjoyed reading your 6-7-3 haiku "Red Rose". You followed the rules correctly. Unfortunately not all red roses have a delightful aroma.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate the review and kind words.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good. You have chosen a great picture to go with it.
This is a terrific contest entry. Good luck in the contest. I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
This is very good. You have chosen a great picture to go with it.
This is a terrific contest entry. Good luck in the contest. I wish you the best.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words, my friend.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a good piece.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count: 6-7-3
Total syllables: 16
Lovely artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Red Rose Haiku.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
You've written a good piece.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count: 6-7-3
Total syllables: 16
Lovely artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Red Rose Haiku.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend.
Comment from Dean Kuch
A beautifully well written haiku, anonymous author.
It's insightful, it is beautifully presented, and with a 6/7/3 syllable count it is well within the limits of seventeen syllables, or less, required by the haiku form.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
A beautifully well written haiku, anonymous author.
It's insightful, it is beautifully presented, and with a 6/7/3 syllable count it is well within the limits of seventeen syllables, or less, required by the haiku form.
Well done.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words my friend. Thank you very much for the six stars.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this is absolutely gorgeous. A haiku done by a master. A perfect structure, great originality and visuals, a picture enhances the effect, but the haiku can stand alone.
I like your syllable count too.
This should make for a strong contender, good luck in the booths
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
Oh, this is absolutely gorgeous. A haiku done by a master. A perfect structure, great originality and visuals, a picture enhances the effect, but the haiku can stand alone.
I like your syllable count too.
This should make for a strong contender, good luck in the booths
Comment Written 14-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words. Thank you for the six stars.