Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Chapter Zehn part zwei"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
38 total reviews
Comment from bookishfabler
I love how your story is so free flowing and into the characters and what they are about. I've got like 55 messages. I will probably only read the books I started. I can't possible keep up. Thanks for sharing
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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I love how your story is so free flowing and into the characters and what they are about. I've got like 55 messages. I will probably only read the books I started. I can't possible keep up. Thanks for sharing
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 25-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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I understand. That happens to me too. Thank you for reading.
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You are actually one I will finish
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Thank you!!!!
Comment from Heidi M
I like Benjamin's patience with Emily and the parallel of Anderson understanding a father's concern for his daughter.
Anderson is being very accommodating to all his guests.
Your writing flows well.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I like Benjamin's patience with Emily and the parallel of Anderson understanding a father's concern for his daughter.
Anderson is being very accommodating to all his guests.
Your writing flows well.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dweigt
Wonderful. I saw absolutely nothing that you need to change.
I enjoyed the conversation with little Emily, and her mispronunciation of "kippah". You also managed to use it as a natural way to reveal a little more about the way Emily is being raised by her mother. Good work!
Keep writing!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Wonderful. I saw absolutely nothing that you need to change.
I enjoyed the conversation with little Emily, and her mispronunciation of "kippah". You also managed to use it as a natural way to reveal a little more about the way Emily is being raised by her mother. Good work!
Keep writing!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, :)
Thank you, for writing this story in a way that is not saying pushing religion on people. It's a beautiful story, and I hope Shana gets the painting back.
TC :)
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Hello, :)
Thank you, for writing this story in a way that is not saying pushing religion on people. It's a beautiful story, and I hope Shana gets the painting back.
TC :)
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Thal1959
An excellent story that is at times profound, yet always easy to keep up with. (Though there were quite a number of characters to keep up with.) I especially enjoy and approve of a work that speaks with respect towards its subject matter and characters compared to the more tawdry works.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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An excellent story that is at times profound, yet always easy to keep up with. (Though there were quite a number of characters to keep up with.) I especially enjoy and approve of a work that speaks with respect towards its subject matter and characters compared to the more tawdry works.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement. Many of the characters are here and then gone, but needed.
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about human sentiment and cultural treat as Anderson assures Benjamin that his daughter has been and will continue to be treated with the upmost respect, no harm comes to her physically or emotionally; I liked.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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This speaks about human sentiment and cultural treat as Anderson assures Benjamin that his daughter has been and will continue to be treated with the upmost respect, no harm comes to her physically or emotionally; I liked.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ricky1024
Excellent work here.
Nice them as well as Imagery flowed well and easy to read.
Adjective Content helped bring this to life, while objective Content was superior.
No Grammar issues...
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Excellent work here.
Nice them as well as Imagery flowed well and easy to read.
Adjective Content helped bring this to life, while objective Content was superior.
No Grammar issues...
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Charmisa Parker
Really great story. I love the part where they talked about the story of King David and God, and the bonding between characters. I love stories like these. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Really great story. I love the part where they talked about the story of King David and God, and the bonding between characters. I love stories like these. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from His Grayness
I found this to be really excellent, first class writing with solid 'Grip" from the outset, and easy reading right through. I look forward to more and will stay tuned, but right now, I cannot suggest anything that would improve this work so far. Many thanks! HIS GRAYNESS:Vance
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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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I found this to be really excellent, first class writing with solid 'Grip" from the outset, and easy reading right through. I look forward to more and will stay tuned, but right now, I cannot suggest anything that would improve this work so far. Many thanks! HIS GRAYNESS:Vance
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from light
Interesting chapter end interesting video. Shana's father shows great patience with Emily explaining the history of the Shield of David. Anderson's offer to take them to the airport shows his compassion.
Elaine
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Interesting chapter end interesting video. Shana's father shows great patience with Emily explaining the history of the Shield of David. Anderson's offer to take them to the airport shows his compassion.
Elaine
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
