Worlds
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19 total reviews
Comment from JudyE
I don't think there would be too many zebras called Efrem! lol I've seen photos of zebra teams but I believe they are quite difficult to tame and break in.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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I don't think there would be too many zebras called Efrem! lol I've seen photos of zebra teams but I believe they are quite difficult to tame and break in.
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Efrem wears a stripe for every poacher he?s stomped.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! He doesn't have any more room!! ;) And I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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LOL! He doesn't have any more room!! ;) And I can tell that this will be an awesome adventure... looking forward to each and every one of them (hope you don't get tired of reading that - lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Yvette, for giving this a look.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Aww, Bill, this poem warms my heart, especially in the midst of the pandemic. I guess the zebra's ne stripe is the equivalent of an angel's new wing. Love it, my friend. I hope you are doing well. Stay safe.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Aww, Bill, this poem warms my heart, especially in the midst of the pandemic. I guess the zebra's ne stripe is the equivalent of an angel's new wing. Love it, my friend. I hope you are doing well. Stay safe.
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, PF. You as well.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bill Schott I read your one-scene script with a group of characters.
I like how you told us how Efrem went to tattoo place and got another stripe.
Gert
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Hello Bill Schott I read your one-scene script with a group of characters.
I like how you told us how Efrem went to tattoo place and got another stripe.
Gert
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thanks, Gert.
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You are welcome Bill Schott (Bill)
Gert
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, I've come in to read your 'Worlds' and what a hilarious place for me to start, at the end of the alphabet! I love it! A Zebra going to a tattoo-artist.
I shall go through them a few at a time. If they are all as much fun as this is, it will make a brilliant fun book. :)) Sandraxx
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Well, I've come in to read your 'Worlds' and what a hilarious place for me to start, at the end of the alphabet! I love it! A Zebra going to a tattoo-artist.
I shall go through them a few at a time. If they are all as much fun as this is, it will make a brilliant fun book. :)) Sandraxx
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you, Sandra. I hope you like them all.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
good topic, Bill.
-I like Efrem's name and
his decision to go to
the tattoo place.
-A zebra can never have
too many stripes!!
-Well done. One down,
310 to go!
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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-Nice artwork and
good topic, Bill.
-I like Efrem's name and
his decision to go to
the tattoo place.
-A zebra can never have
too many stripes!!
-Well done. One down,
310 to go!
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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I think he's covering up an old girlfriend's name.
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😊Smart zebra.
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, well a zebra can always use a new stripe. This is the start of your book I am presuming, so I shall begin and see how far I get.
311 Chapters?! Yikes
Great job and I hope I don't get dinged for copy and past reviewing. ;-)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Ha, well a zebra can always use a new stripe. This is the start of your book I am presuming, so I shall begin and see how far I get.
311 Chapters?! Yikes
Great job and I hope I don't get dinged for copy and past reviewing. ;-)
Gloria
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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I gave you an out on this page by suggesting the C and P for this particular activity. I'm pretty sure I would have to be the one who complained.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! And what a great name for a zebra - Efrem as in Efrem Zimbalist Jr. - the FBI guy. I hope he likes the new stripe because he won't be able to take it off. Enjoyed the fun.
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Lol! And what a great name for a zebra - Efrem as in Efrem Zimbalist Jr. - the FBI guy. I hope he likes the new stripe because he won't be able to take it off. Enjoyed the fun.
Comment Written 16-May-2020
reply by the author on 16-May-2020
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Thank you, lyenochka
Comment from Bill Pinder
Now that is some great zebra humor. Great idea to come up with a zebra heading to a tattoo parlor for a stripe. I'll have to check out some of your other stuff. Bill
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Now that is some great zebra humor. Great idea to come up with a zebra heading to a tattoo parlor for a stripe. I'll have to check out some of your other stuff. Bill
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks, Bill
Comment from w.j.debi
Body art is so important, and you have to get just the right artist to get the results you want. Now, which one is the real stripe, and which one is the tattoo? Maybe he should bet it in color. Love the humor.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Body art is so important, and you have to get just the right artist to get the results you want. Now, which one is the real stripe, and which one is the tattoo? Maybe he should bet it in color. Love the humor.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanks, WJ.
