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My Best Friend Teddy

A poem about a cherished toy

5 total reviews 
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is a great poem. It reminds of my son when he was little. He had a favorite stuffed toy that we left behind on a trip to Kentucky. He missed it terribly. Two years later I found the same toy and gave it to him. He said, Timmy. I missed you.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
    I had a stuffed dog pillow when I was young, that I couldn't be without. Unfortunately, it disintegrated after so many years.😕thank you for taking the time to read I my poem,I really appreciate it.
Comment from Curly Girly
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This is a lovely story about a childhood favourite toy--a teddy bear. You are very good if you have managed to keep him that long.
Back in my day, parents decided you were too old for them, so they got confiscated and trashed--enough to break any child's heart.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I only read my work to my own family until I discovered Fanstory, and it's great to hear what other people think.im so
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about a cherished toy like real, a pride possession, all feelings and emotions shared everywhere, all moments of living it was there; problems and difficulties shared; I liked.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2017
    I'm so glad you liked my poem. I appreciate you're taking the time to read it.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing your entry in the Teddy Bear poetry contest. Your story sounds like one that could've been written by my daughter. She is thirty-two now, and her teddy still has a treasured place in her house,

~patty~

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I too have my teddy bear and also my Barbie dolls from the 60s. I really appreciate the feedback .
Comment from damommy
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I like Teddy very much. He sounds like my kind of bear. A friend all through your life. Your poem reminds me of 'The Velveteen Rabbit.' Have you read that one?

I have my first doll. She will be 74 this Christmas. 8-)

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2017
    Thank you for your kind words. I have never read The velveteen Rabbit, but will make it a point to now.iI also have some of my dolls from childhood, like my very first Barbie from the 60s. I look forward to reading some of your work. Thanks again.
reply by damommy on 11-Jul-2017
    You'll love 'The Velveteen Rabbit.'