Paths
A Cinquain5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Paths, has the appropriate set up and reminds us that the future is not a beaten path but a trail that needs to be cleared by the new traveler.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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This cinquain, Paths, has the appropriate set up and reminds us that the future is not a beaten path but a trail that needs to be cleared by the new traveler.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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So true. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading 'Paths', I find that it meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
Each of the five lines have the correct syllable count.
My favorite part: 'look for the ones less traveled'- This inspires the reader to adventure on their own.
My grandmother always told me to be a leader and not a follower; to take the road less traveled.
The image shown captures the meaning of this poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Cinquain.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Spell check: In the last line, 'travelled'- I think it should be spelled 'traveled'. Just my opinion.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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After reading 'Paths', I find that it meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
Each of the five lines have the correct syllable count.
My favorite part: 'look for the ones less traveled'- This inspires the reader to adventure on their own.
My grandmother always told me to be a leader and not a follower; to take the road less traveled.
The image shown captures the meaning of this poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Cinquain.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Spell check: In the last line, 'travelled'- I think it should be spelled 'traveled'. Just my opinion.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Many thanks for your insightful review.
Comment from Mame
Very good example of 'cinquain.' How perfectly true is the message conveyed in your poem. We are told which paths to follow as if others know what is best for us- congratulations to those who find their own 'path' Great colour!
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Very good example of 'cinquain.' How perfectly true is the message conveyed in your poem. We are told which paths to follow as if others know what is best for us- congratulations to those who find their own 'path' Great colour!
Comment Written 17-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your positive feedback!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a wonderful cinquain poem, my friend; very thought provoking I'd say. So very true your words are, an enlightenment on life. Well done. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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This is a wonderful cinquain poem, my friend; very thought provoking I'd say. So very true your words are, an enlightenment on life. Well done. ~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your insights.
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Your very welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about self discovery; we make our journey to the most known and common paths chosen by others and become wise when we discover a less travelled path; I liked.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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This speaks about self discovery; we make our journey to the most known and common paths chosen by others and become wise when we discover a less travelled path; I liked.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Appreciate your insightful review.
