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9 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Great words for the sloth movements!! ;) Whew! No sixteen-legged creatures! And hooray for sloths - of course, my favoritist sloth in the world works at the DMV in the movie 'Zootopia'... lol!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Great words for the sloth movements!! ;) Whew! No sixteen-legged creatures! And hooray for sloths - of course, my favoritist sloth in the world works at the DMV in the movie 'Zootopia'... lol!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-May-2020
reply by the author on 19-May-2020
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Guess she could have just jumped.
Comment from BeasPeas
Great little poem. She is a gorgeous she-sloth who has a mind of her own and found her he-sloth. Very sweet and amusing. I enjoyed reading this addition to your sloth series. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Great little poem. She is a gorgeous she-sloth who has a mind of her own and found her he-sloth. Very sweet and amusing. I enjoyed reading this addition to your sloth series. Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thanks. Marilyn.
Comment from frogbook
Very sweet. I have to tell you as I was scrolling down to see the poem the 1st thing I was reminded of by the hair was Albert Einstein-haha. Maybe you'll use that in a future sloth-o-rama. LOL. Enjoyed this little gem.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Very sweet. I have to tell you as I was scrolling down to see the poem the 1st thing I was reminded of by the hair was Albert Einstein-haha. Maybe you'll use that in a future sloth-o-rama. LOL. Enjoyed this little gem.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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I saw the face of a morlock from the 1965 movie The Time Machine.
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Oh yes-agree!
Comment from BOO ghost
Good one Bill. I know people that act and look like a sloth. Very nice looking presentation. Nice usage of (s) word alliterations. Te tan background is a perfect match to the picture. Job well done and I enjoyed it. BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Good one Bill. I know people that act and look like a sloth. Very nice looking presentation. Nice usage of (s) word alliterations. Te tan background is a perfect match to the picture. Job well done and I enjoyed it. BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Thanks, BOO.
Comment from damommy
Now, there's a tongue twister for you. What a sweet face she has. I once watched a video on TV of a mother sloth trying to save her baby, who had fallen into the river, from a crocodile. It was impossible for her to move fast, as you well know, and I suffered for her. Luckily, she saved the baby, but I'll never forget how slowly she moved. I've seen people working that moved like that. lol
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Now, there's a tongue twister for you. What a sweet face she has. I once watched a video on TV of a mother sloth trying to save her baby, who had fallen into the river, from a crocodile. It was impossible for her to move fast, as you well know, and I suffered for her. Luckily, she saved the baby, but I'll never forget how slowly she moved. I've seen people working that moved like that. lol
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you, da, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Oh good. By the time he wakes up she'll be almost there. I have heard that female sloths never complain about the males finishing too quickly, as they never do anything quickly. Bear in mind that this is only what I have heard, read or been told.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Oh good. By the time he wakes up she'll be almost there. I have heard that female sloths never complain about the males finishing too quickly, as they never do anything quickly. Bear in mind that this is only what I have heard, read or been told.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thanks, nomi
Comment from robina1978
A lovely sloth that complements your stanza perfectly. She slowly came down the tree, and found her he-sloth. They are so nice to look at. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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A lovely sloth that complements your stanza perfectly. She slowly came down the tree, and found her he-sloth. They are so nice to look at. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Ine, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Great that they found each other! I like the sound of "Chloe slowly" which I can't determine if it's assonance or near rhyme. Lots of fun alliteration all throughout this short and fun to read poem.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Lol! Great that they found each other! I like the sound of "Chloe slowly" which I can't determine if it's assonance or near rhyme. Lots of fun alliteration all throughout this short and fun to read poem.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you, lyenochka, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is an interesting verse with the use of some archaic language. I was slightly confused by it, but I guess, it's open to different interpretations?
Cute picture. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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That is an interesting verse with the use of some archaic language. I was slightly confused by it, but I guess, it's open to different interpretations?
Cute picture. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thanks for giving this a look.
