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Comment from humpwhistle
Sloth art is unknown to me, Bill.
I expect I need to Google the reference.
I imagine a sloth could serve as a brush.
Something I'd like to see.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Sloth art is unknown to me, Bill.
I expect I need to Google the reference.
I imagine a sloth could serve as a brush.
Something I'd like to see.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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If you find a sloth artist let me know. Perhaps you could let it know too.
Comment from Vicki Easterly
Short, pithy, fun use of words. You could be teasing us, You might be talking about a literal art class, or you might be talking about the class of life. Anyway, "when you snooze, you lose." Good job.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Short, pithy, fun use of words. You could be teasing us, You might be talking about a literal art class, or you might be talking about the class of life. Anyway, "when you snooze, you lose." Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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My current theme is sloths. I did Horse World 1-10', Spider World 1-10, Octopus World 1-10, and now thus guy.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Your cinquain made me laugh, Bill. Sloth art. What a concept. I can picture the little guy lazily fingerpainting, swirling the pretty colored soup. Well done. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Your cinquain made me laugh, Bill. Sloth art. What a concept. I can picture the little guy lazily fingerpainting, swirling the pretty colored soup. Well done. :) Nancy
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thanks, Nancy, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from rama devi
Slathered--great word choice echoing the SL of sloth.
Fun combination of words and painting. They match well.
Good alliteration of A and S and consonance of L and T.
Lost art and sloth art sound so similar...it's a clever bookend technique. Made me smile. Bravo
Warmly, rd
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Slathered--great word choice echoing the SL of sloth.
Fun combination of words and painting. They match well.
Good alliteration of A and S and consonance of L and T.
Lost art and sloth art sound so similar...it's a clever bookend technique. Made me smile. Bravo
Warmly, rd
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you, rd, fir the thorough and generous review. Bill
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Ah, it's you! i reviewed it with blinders! :-)))
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about lost art of making slathered canvas in today's high fashion world because it takes a long time to make such a sloth art of such production; I liked.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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This speaks about lost art of making slathered canvas in today's high fashion world because it takes a long time to make such a sloth art of such production; I liked.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you, ALD.
