We Can't All Be Roses
A Lune3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes I guess we can all say 'Amen' to that very wise admonition portrayed effectively here in this restricted format of the Lune -but oh how true it rings
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Yes I guess we can all say 'Amen' to that very wise admonition portrayed effectively here in this restricted format of the Lune -but oh how true it rings
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from RodG
his lune says so much in only 13 syllables. Your theme of self-discovery is stated so memorably because of your apt choice of words: uniqueness (in a line all by itself) and "embrace it." Adolescents, especially, should post this poem on their bedroom walls.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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his lune says so much in only 13 syllables. Your theme of self-discovery is stated so memorably because of your apt choice of words: uniqueness (in a line all by itself) and "embrace it." Adolescents, especially, should post this poem on their bedroom walls.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Yes. Young people should realize we are all beautiful in our own way
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a unique Lune. Beautiful and perfect in every way. Loved the picture of your passionflower. You are right - we all can't be roses, some are clovers in the field (smile).
Excellent work, I wish you luck in the contest, love, Y.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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What a unique Lune. Beautiful and perfect in every way. Loved the picture of your passionflower. You are right - we all can't be roses, some are clovers in the field (smile).
Excellent work, I wish you luck in the contest, love, Y.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you! We are all beautiful in our own way.
