Uncertain
Hearts torn apart3 total reviews
Comment from Lindagail Hall
This is a well tuned tight write. Though the reader feels the authors pain, and tries to place themselves in this chaotic emotions yet you still hold onto hope that the other may return to sort their differences out. Well wrote good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
This is a well tuned tight write. Though the reader feels the authors pain, and tries to place themselves in this chaotic emotions yet you still hold onto hope that the other may return to sort their differences out. Well wrote good luck in the contest
Comment Written 04-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your very nice review. Its great to hear back from other writers.
Comment from zanya
A searingly honest portrayal of the reality of family rows and how they can tear us apart 'disorder reigned /in our house of pain'- the poem so effectively evokes the turmoil-
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
A searingly honest portrayal of the reality of family rows and how they can tear us apart 'disorder reigned /in our house of pain'- the poem so effectively evokes the turmoil-
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
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Thank you your nice review. Its great to hear from other writers
Comment from JennaG
This is a very powerful and emotional piece. You've made good use of the required words. I like your description of the house that's so quiet, but the thoughts inside the mind raging and rioting. Good use of rhyme and great picture to accompany your work. Well done! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
This is a very powerful and emotional piece. You've made good use of the required words. I like your description of the house that's so quiet, but the thoughts inside the mind raging and rioting. Good use of rhyme and great picture to accompany your work. Well done! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the best wishes and the kind review.