Warren
Tiny problems.15 total reviews
Comment from trumby
I just wanted to see what your writing was like. Very good stuff.
It uses the same technique as the one about the roo.
I probably can't compete with you. I got trained in "knocks". "Hard school of---"
Welcome to the site
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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I just wanted to see what your writing was like. Very good stuff.
It uses the same technique as the one about the roo.
I probably can't compete with you. I got trained in "knocks". "Hard school of---"
Welcome to the site
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading and for becoming a fan. I'll fan you back as soon as I can.
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I'm interested that you come from Spain. (That's where the rain falls mainly in the plains, isn't it?)
(My Fair Lady) LOL
My wife comes from the Philippines,
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Very funny.
Not much rain here at the moment. ;)
There's another writer in FS whose wife is also from the Philippines. His name is Walu Feral (Fez).
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Fez is also originally from Australia.
We both got brides from PH. as it's impossible to get a good one in Australia
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I know he's from Australia, I follow his autobiography. He sounds like a very nice guy.
Comment from Teri7
Maria, This is a very cute story you have penned about little Warren. It was too funny that he met the cat face to face because of him using the cat door! Very good wording and love the picture of the cat! Best wishes in the prompt! Teri
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Maria, This is a very cute story you have penned about little Warren. It was too funny that he met the cat face to face because of him using the cat door! Very good wording and love the picture of the cat! Best wishes in the prompt! Teri
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017
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Thanks for reading, Teri.
Comment from Kalimba Fire
The story of Warren the curious kitty was quite enjoyable, and nicely written. This story is the perfect allegory for 'Curiosity killed the kitty cat'.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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The story of Warren the curious kitty was quite enjoyable, and nicely written. This story is the perfect allegory for 'Curiosity killed the kitty cat'.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Warren is a mouse, not a kitty. ;)
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
What a cute story about Warren's curiosity about the mystery door. I definitely had a fun time reading it
I wish you the very best in this contest
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Hello author
What a cute story about Warren's curiosity about the mystery door. I definitely had a fun time reading it
I wish you the very best in this contest
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Gert.
Comment from damommy
That was quite a surprise! I was expecting something awful. I bet Warren learned his lesson. Cheeky little fellow! lol
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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That was quite a surprise! I was expecting something awful. I bet Warren learned his lesson. Cheeky little fellow! lol
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reading, Yvonne.
Comment from Bucketlist
This is a cute story about Warren, and finding a door. I enjoy your prose
But can't help feeling the ending somehow truncated too soon. The last sentence had an oh! finish, but I can't fix it!
Hugs Trisha
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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This is a cute story about Warren, and finding a door. I enjoy your prose
But can't help feeling the ending somehow truncated too soon. The last sentence had an oh! finish, but I can't fix it!
Hugs Trisha
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your comments, Trisha.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Obviously the people from this big house were very trusting leaving their doors open so Warren could get in.I thought at first Warren was going to be the cat but no, that cat was finally Warren's undoing. He learnt to listen to Mum. Good luck in this contest,
cheers.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Obviously the people from this big house were very trusting leaving their doors open so Warren could get in.I thought at first Warren was going to be the cat but no, that cat was finally Warren's undoing. He learnt to listen to Mum. Good luck in this contest,
cheers.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Warren was tiny, so he could go into the house by creeping under any door.
Thanks for reading.
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Oh! So warren was a mouse?
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Yes 😊
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Maria, this is a very smart entry story for the "Door" contest. Your character, Warren is so adorable and likable. I love how you described his personality and I love that he learned his lesson in the end. This is a great story...EXCELLENT!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Maria, this is a very smart entry story for the "Door" contest. Your character, Warren is so adorable and likable. I love how you described his personality and I love that he learned his lesson in the end. This is a great story...EXCELLENT!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reading, Tier.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very good. It's an interesting and unusual take on the door. I'm sure it will do well in the contest. No one else will come at it from this perspective. Good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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This is very good. It's an interesting and unusual take on the door. I'm sure it will do well in the contest. No one else will come at it from this perspective. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your review, Thomas.
Comment from DR DIP
Is warren a cat as well or a dog. I assume the photo represents the cat coming in.
How did Warren get in the house if hadn't known of the cat door.
Was there a window or a door open for him to get in? If he is a dog would not of him chase the cat? All these questions demand answers!! haha
Always a fun write Maria thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Is warren a cat as well or a dog. I assume the photo represents the cat coming in.
How did Warren get in the house if hadn't known of the cat door.
Was there a window or a door open for him to get in? If he is a dog would not of him chase the cat? All these questions demand answers!! haha
Always a fun write Maria thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 30-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Warren is a mouse! That's why he's so afraid of the cat...
Thanks for reading.
