Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello author, Your poem beautifully illustrates the changing seasons. I especially liked:

As lemonade stands slowly shut down
And summer gardens start to turn brown
Suntanned tourists stream out of town

(Good alliteration, imagery, and rhyming.)

Your poem was a pleasure to read. It made me smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thank you very much,

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like the seasonal changes described in terms of fruit and produce and the different types of people from tourists to harvesters and passersby. Good format and rhymes and the enthusiastic ending of the corn popping.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017

Getting some cooler weather around here lately. Putting me in the mood for some cider and popcorn! Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

There are so many poetic forms that I barely keep up. Based upon the form criteria, you excuted the form flawlessly.

Also, the poem, itself, is packed with imagery and personification. I can hear, see and smell Autumn as I read your poem.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2017

Thank you! Getting cooler these days, I can smell the cider!