Birth
Seven little words about being born8 total reviews
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very nice one - six - one poem meets the contest rules and is a pleasant read. Excellent choice of artwork. One question/typo - did you want the apostrophe in "show's" - would mean "Show is value..." or that birth is the show's(possessive) value?
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Very nice one - six - one poem meets the contest rules and is a pleasant read. Excellent choice of artwork. One question/typo - did you want the apostrophe in "show's" - would mean "Show is value..." or that birth is the show's(possessive) value?
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
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You're welcome
Comment from mkflood
well i thank you for selecting my work. it does work well together. it is an honor to have my work included with yours. great job on poem and thanks again..mkflood
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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well i thank you for selecting my work. it does work well together. it is an honor to have my work included with yours. great job on poem and thanks again..mkflood
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Appreciate you making it available.
Glad you enjoyed this poem.
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Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a good entry for the 1-6-1 contest. Seven words that express how giving life is a gift. For some people, they do not even consider this miracle and do not put enough worth or thought into being blessed with an angel. However, for those that do, the birth can add value to their worth with loving parenting. Your 1-6-1 got me thinking...thank you. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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This is a good entry for the 1-6-1 contest. Seven words that express how giving life is a gift. For some people, they do not even consider this miracle and do not put enough worth or thought into being blessed with an angel. However, for those that do, the birth can add value to their worth with loving parenting. Your 1-6-1 got me thinking...thank you. Best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 about the birth of a child. It is a precious moment for the parents each time when one of their children is born. Each child has his/her own worth.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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A very well-written 1-6-1 about the birth of a child. It is a precious moment for the parents each time when one of their children is born. Each child has his/her own worth.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks.
Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is great. Avery short poem, as per contest rules, that perfectly describes the miracle of child birth. I have six children. I experienced this six times with my wife.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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This is great. Avery short poem, as per contest rules, that perfectly describes the miracle of child birth. I have six children. I experienced this six times with my wife.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Appreciate the review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks in a clear and natural way of just seven words to express how it is being born, the state of feeling of joy, besides the state endows value; I like.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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This speaks in a clear and natural way of just seven words to express how it is being born, the state of feeling of joy, besides the state endows value; I like.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Comment from Thal1959
I don't care much for the briefer forms since one doesn't have enough to do anything with. But you did a good one here. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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I don't care much for the briefer forms since one doesn't have enough to do anything with. But you did a good one here. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
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You're welcome, Brett - it was my pleasure.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine poem and entry for the contest
with correct syllables at 1-6-1 and the three rhymes
Excellent art work choice; it does match the poem very well
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting
RS
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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This is a fine poem and entry for the contest
with correct syllables at 1-6-1 and the three rhymes
Excellent art work choice; it does match the poem very well
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting
RS
Comment Written 01-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this poem.
