Comment from valmay

Excellent

I really like this and think. It is clever but I'm not sure the second line rhymes like the rules of the competition say they must. Sorry I don't have anything more constructive to add.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thank you for the compliments, Valmay. "Near rhymes' generally are accepted as rhymes in poetry, and have been used extensively in FS contests, so I'm counting on the committee to recognize that practice. :)

reply by valmay on 02-Sep-2017

I hope so too.

Comment from smbau

Excellent

Wonderful three line poem that portrays projected political actions. The picture, background and font colors further expound the overall theme of the poem. Very creative. Wish you all the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thank you for your much appreciated comments, smbau.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

It does seem at times as though the unconventional style of this President may eventually lead to his downfall. Many mixed messages continue to confuse both those within America and those in the world at large.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2017

Thanks for your comments, Tony, but his style, as repugnant as it is, has little to do with what eventually may bring about his impeachment, and possible conviction for criminal activity he blatantly flaunts..

Please resist any inclination to add the proverbial' grain of salt' to what I've said.

Cheers.