Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "A Touch Of Fall"My book of poems and stories
6 total reviews
Comment from EverInParadise
Simple and to the point. The beginning of a season shown to us in you verses. Often poetry Tells instead of shows the reader. Yours in an exception that made reading this a delight. The art is a perfect attachment to your view.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Simple and to the point. The beginning of a season shown to us in you verses. Often poetry Tells instead of shows the reader. Yours in an exception that made reading this a delight. The art is a perfect attachment to your view.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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I thank you for your kind words and wonderful review.
Comment from jaded831
I usually don't review poems for 2 member cents, but I found your work unique. Everyone writes about trees, and harvest, you put a different spin on Fall. I love the ocean, I even liked the picture, it reflects the loneliness of the beach in Fall.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I usually don't review poems for 2 member cents, but I found your work unique. Everyone writes about trees, and harvest, you put a different spin on Fall. I love the ocean, I even liked the picture, it reflects the loneliness of the beach in Fall.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your honest review. It was my intent to try something different and put a new slant on fall. I didn't post it longer as it was done last minute.
Comment from ragerde
Away from the usual fall foliage, you have created a dramatic picture of an autumn seascape, complete with sand, waves and gulls. You can feel the seasonal changes in your words.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Away from the usual fall foliage, you have created a dramatic picture of an autumn seascape, complete with sand, waves and gulls. You can feel the seasonal changes in your words.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your kind review. It was my intent to try something different and put a new slant on fall.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-You followed the prompt directions
and have a nice poem.
-Imagery is very vivid and paints
a word picture of the scenes.
-The use of rhyme creates a
good flow to the poem.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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-Very nice image.
-You followed the prompt directions
and have a nice poem.
-Imagery is very vivid and paints
a word picture of the scenes.
-The use of rhyme creates a
good flow to the poem.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your kind review. It was my intent to try something different and put a new slant on fall.
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You are welcome. I think you did a good job.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine poem and entry for the contest
with the correct 3-2-1 form and rhymes
Ah, summer has had its run, and fall is almost upon us
but I hold out for a few more weeks of sunshine
Excellent descriptive imagery and art work to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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This is a fine poem and entry for the contest
with the correct 3-2-1 form and rhymes
Ah, summer has had its run, and fall is almost upon us
but I hold out for a few more weeks of sunshine
Excellent descriptive imagery and art work to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your kind review. It was my intent to try something different and put a new slant on fall.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful 3-2-1 poem you have penned for the contest about Summer slipping into Fall. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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This is a very beautiful 3-2-1 poem you have penned for the contest about Summer slipping into Fall. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 05-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your kind review. It was my intent to try something different and put a new slant on fall.