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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Section 6 - Part 2: Sponge"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, Brett:
So here we are, right at the answer. He is still alive, just as I thought and still murdering as he goes along. What a monster of a man. He is the Devil himself and it's obvious he finds great pleasure in being the way he is. I'm sorry but I can't wait until he meets with his fate, his final destruction, his death. "Live by Murder/Die by Murder"
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Good morning, Brett:
So here we are, right at the answer. He is still alive, just as I thought and still murdering as he goes along. What a monster of a man. He is the Devil himself and it's obvious he finds great pleasure in being the way he is. I'm sorry but I can't wait until he meets with his fate, his final destruction, his death. "Live by Murder/Die by Murder"
Comment Written 16-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
I ABSOLUTLY LOVE YOUR WRITING I USUALY
ONLY READ POETRY ,I GOT CAUGHT UP IN YOUR STORY
AND READ THEM EVERY DAY BUT TODAY I HAD A SIX LEFT
AND KNEW IT JUST HAD TO GO TO YOU
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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I ABSOLUTLY LOVE YOUR WRITING I USUALY
ONLY READ POETRY ,I GOT CAUGHT UP IN YOUR STORY
AND READ THEM EVERY DAY BUT TODAY I HAD A SIX LEFT
AND KNEW IT JUST HAD TO GO TO YOU
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Appreciate that very much.
Glad you enjoyed reading what I write and appreciate the reviews.
Comment from Rasmine
As far as actions regarding them went, he took his own (What does this mean? You lost me!).
Good chapter. You show his anger and narcissism well.
Take care.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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As far as actions regarding them went, he took his own (What does this mean? You lost me!).
Good chapter. You show his anger and narcissism well.
Take care.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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It means he did exactly what he wanted to do where women were concerned.
True narcissism.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
As usual. Excellently written and a great place to stop leading us to want more. What does he have planned for Cody and will Cody be able to defend himself.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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As usual. Excellently written and a great place to stop leading us to want more. What does he have planned for Cody and will Cody be able to defend himself.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
As always, appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Mistydawn
Earl is one sick puppy for sure. I just hope Cody is careful and keeps his pistol handy. The picture of the freckled face boy seems to be a perfect fit for the kid. The chapter is well written, smooth dialogue and the plot flows along nicely. The characters seem real.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Earl is one sick puppy for sure. I just hope Cody is careful and keeps his pistol handy. The picture of the freckled face boy seems to be a perfect fit for the kid. The chapter is well written, smooth dialogue and the plot flows along nicely. The characters seem real.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from royowen
Boy, this is a "baddie" to end all baddies Brett. Earl Anthony Schroder, a man who glorifies animals with his name. After murdering Sonya Davidson, he's starting to heap derision on his own son by default, but people like him, deserve only one thing...a sticky end. Well done, great descriptive imagery in this story, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : petit(e) brunette.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Boy, this is a "baddie" to end all baddies Brett. Earl Anthony Schroder, a man who glorifies animals with his name. After murdering Sonya Davidson, he's starting to heap derision on his own son by default, but people like him, deserve only one thing...a sticky end. Well done, great descriptive imagery in this story, well done, blessings, Roy
Typo : petit(e) brunette.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate the comments, support, and review.
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Well done Brett,
Comment from Jackreese
A very interesting chapter. I definitely am going to read more. I also thought the picture was adorable. I am glad you had the list of characters at the end, as I wasn't sure who was who. I did think you did a great job with this piece. I would have given this a six if I could. Great job!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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A very interesting chapter. I definitely am going to read more. I also thought the picture was adorable. I am glad you had the list of characters at the end, as I wasn't sure who was who. I did think you did a great job with this piece. I would have given this a six if I could. Great job!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Comment from MizKat
This was okay but I didn't like that Cody's dad had killed that lady. I sure hope that he isn't teaching Cody to kill people too. Cody seems like a nice young boy and I hope he stays that way.
Kat
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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This was okay but I didn't like that Cody's dad had killed that lady. I sure hope that he isn't teaching Cody to kill people too. Cody seems like a nice young boy and I hope he stays that way.
Kat
Comment Written 10-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Earl Anthony Schroder killed that lady, not Sheriff Daniels.
Hard to know what Cody may be up to these days?
Glad you enjoyed this portion of his story.
Appreciate the comments and the review.
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Your very welcome for the nice things you said. Thanks for letting me know that I was wrong about who killed who.
I appreciate you letting me know. Kat
