Seahorse Romance
A Double Nonet10 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
What a great guy! Quite the reverse in nature! You chose a beautiful picture, and wrote a good poem. Thanks for sharing, I hope you will do well in this contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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What a great guy! Quite the reverse in nature! You chose a beautiful picture, and wrote a good poem. Thanks for sharing, I hope you will do well in this contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging comments!
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You are welcome!
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Very welcome
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, this would get my vote just for that gorgeous picture!! But it is also well researched, and quite informative!! Excellent entry!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Well, this would get my vote just for that gorgeous picture!! But it is also well researched, and quite informative!! Excellent entry!! Blessings...
Comment Written 16-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging comments!
Comment from JennaG
I really enjoyed your double nonet about seahorses! Whenever we're at the aquarium in our town, I always have to check out the seahorses. They're fascinating to watch! I really don't know too much about them, though, so I found your poem to be very interesting and educational. Your syllable count is correct throughout and I love the picture you've chosen to accompany your words. Best of luck to you in the contest! This piece is very well done! :)
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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I really enjoyed your double nonet about seahorses! Whenever we're at the aquarium in our town, I always have to check out the seahorses. They're fascinating to watch! I really don't know too much about them, though, so I found your poem to be very interesting and educational. Your syllable count is correct throughout and I love the picture you've chosen to accompany your words. Best of luck to you in the contest! This piece is very well done! :)
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a very interesting, educational poem about seahorses. It's well written, has a nice steady flow and is well within the nonet guidelines. Nice job. Good luck on your contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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This is a very interesting, educational poem about seahorses. It's well written, has a nice steady flow and is well within the nonet guidelines. Nice job. Good luck on your contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging comments!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Animal Nonet you have penned for the contest about the sea horse from courtship until baby is born. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the picture. I love sea horses. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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This is a very well written Animal Nonet you have penned for the contest about the sea horse from courtship until baby is born. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the picture. I love sea horses. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Grey Cntima
Electric. I really like writing like this that magnifies a single act into a vast experience. A very fun read. It almost has a hysteric feel to it. Like a small glimpse of chaos within an orderly system.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Electric. I really like writing like this that magnifies a single act into a vast experience. A very fun read. It almost has a hysteric feel to it. Like a small glimpse of chaos within an orderly system.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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So glad you enjoyed it. Was fun writing this double nonet. Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a sweet and delicate poem that even teaches us a little bit about the origination of baby seahorses! Cool! It's a neat entry for the animal nonet contest, and I counted - just to keep you honest - and each line is absolutely perfect. So, only one question. What the devil does the hippocampus have to do with anything here???????? hahahaha!
Thanks and good luck, anyway!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a sweet and delicate poem that even teaches us a little bit about the origination of baby seahorses! Cool! It's a neat entry for the animal nonet contest, and I counted - just to keep you honest - and each line is absolutely perfect. So, only one question. What the devil does the hippocampus have to do with anything here???????? hahahaha!
Thanks and good luck, anyway!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Technical name for the seahorse. Should probably change the title. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written and interesting double Nonet and the unique love life of the hippocampus. Mom lays the eggs in dad's pouch and he looks after them until they are ready to do their own dance of love.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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A very well-written and interesting double Nonet and the unique love life of the hippocampus. Mom lays the eggs in dad's pouch and he looks after them until they are ready to do their own dance of love.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your positive feedback.
Comment from frierajac
It takes me back to the time when I visited Sea World and a sea horse was my souvenir. I have also drawn pictures of them in coral pieces. They are an inspiration
to many. Your oem does them justice.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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It takes me back to the time when I visited Sea World and a sea horse was my souvenir. I have also drawn pictures of them in coral pieces. They are an inspiration
to many. Your oem does them justice.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the hippocampus love of horse fish about their new generation, mom has to lay eggs but dad feeds and cares the little eggs until they are hatched for new generation; I liked.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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This speaks the hippocampus love of horse fish about their new generation, mom has to lay eggs but dad feeds and cares the little eggs until they are hatched for new generation; I liked.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thank you for your kind consideration.
