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Comment from LIJ Red
I found rows of fuzzy caterpillars marching along the wire fence and over the gate,
I had noticed the big wads of web in the sourwood trees...anybody need a few thousand caterpillars? Good live bait. Your acrostic looks excellent to me.
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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I found rows of fuzzy caterpillars marching along the wire fence and over the gate,
I had noticed the big wads of web in the sourwood trees...anybody need a few thousand caterpillars? Good live bait. Your acrostic looks excellent to me.
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Comment Written 18-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2017
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Thank you, LIJ, for giving this a look. Pass on the caterpillars. Bill
